Ignis 13/?

[kaybee38]

Title: Ignis/Chapter 13 - "Alliance"
Author: kaybee38
Rating: PG
Pairings: friendship!Jonghyun/Onew, Minho/Onew, Taemin/Sulli, eventual!JongKey, broken!Minho/Yuri
Genre: fantasy, sci-fi, character death
Disclaimer: SHINee is owned by SM Entertainment only
Summary: Teneo are humans that live among us that have a genetic mutation that gives them the

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[kaybee38]

spot for stjoan4eva

[stjoan4eva]

Between Sulli fangirling (I won't lie, I would do the same thing in her shoes) and Onew and Minho's dick measuring contest...

...

Sorry, got lost for a second there. Ahem.

But I think you handled the emotions of everyone meeting Minho in a proper setting very well, and I am ever so curious about the gentleman in the shades. ^_^

My fav line from this chapter: “Be careful with that.” Onew cautioned Minho.

It had happened so fast, Minho didn’t even realize he was holding Heechul’s teacup and saucer, and Heechul didn’t even notice it was missing. Some of the tea from the cup splashed to the floor as Minho recovered from the shock and tried to steady the porcelain in in his hands.

I clapped in real life. lol

[kaybee38]

HA! I'm so glad you liked that part! I tried to go back through and make things more descriptive like you're so good at doing...

You said Onew, Minho and dick in the same sentence. *giggle*

In other news....
Caught my man humming "Hot Times" today around the house. Yeeessss Resisitance is futile, he will be assimilated. *rubs hands together evilly*

[kaybee38]

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[kyttenfae]

As someone who watches more cop/detective shows than I want to admit, I approve of this chapter wholeheartedly. Bwahahahha, you win /again/, Unnie! *bounces* And Kyu! Nice! And omg Onew and Minho's "showdown" was hot. And I love Sulli being like, "EVERYONE IS SO SHINY!!!11~!!" <3333 Yay new Ignis!!

[kaybee38]

Sulli is just all fangirly over Minho cuz he saved her life and Taemin is just having a severe attack of jealousy. I knew I'd crossed a boundary into Criminal Minds when I wrote "unsub" (sigh).

I just put TofuHo in the oven, it's just getting warm, it'll be nice and hot soon and ready to serve!

[kaybee38]

spot for ellie_eunnie

thanks for the spot!

[ellie_eunnie]

Minho almost lost the shorter man a couple of times as his camel cashmere turtleneck sweater kept blending him in with the walls.
and I thought it was his height =)

Minho flinched a bit, clearly not used to uninitiated contact.
ohh, you mean sex, don't you? ;D
JONGHO SEX ...*drools*
The man wore a long trench coat over dark slacks and a grey turtleneck sweater. He stared at Minho from behind equally dark aviator sunglasses for an extended moment, hand still attached to Minho’s shoulder, then smirked and quickly walked away.
I know someone wants it ;DD

He really was tall, and his legs seemed to go on forever in the dark blue skinny jeans and lace-up black leather boots he was wearing. He wore a simple white oxford under a v-neck dark blue sweater trimmed with a light blue stripe, and some type of silver chain around his neck.
OHHH I LOVED THIS CHARACTERIZATION

One didn’t have to be telepathic to see that Onew was both curious and a little fearful of him.

Onew was unapologetically staring at Minho at this point, who returned

Re: thanks for the spot!

[kaybee38]

ELLLIIIIEEE! I so miss you and your picspam! Ok lemme see here

Re: thanks for the spot!

[ellie_eunnie]

I don't feel so smart anymore...*goes back to homework*

now I got it though...and I cringed when I realized my heech/lee confusion...*feels really stupid*

BUT AT LEAST I GOT PANCAKES *grins*

I'll try to read that soon, promise!
<333333333333333

[kaybee38]

spot for eijifujiryoma

[eijifujiryoma]

HAH. I'm not late (by much) this time!

I am soooooooo spazzing over Jinki in this story. He is awesome. And they're little piss fight made me giggle [and swoon, because I'm currently obsessed with fighting!TofuHo which I think is drooling hot] but it's nice to see real TofuHo interaction. Things are getting more interesting by the minute, can't wait for next post~ I'll try not to miss it this time ^^;;

♥~

[kaybee38]

I'm glad you like! If you like fighting and guns and kick-ass TofuHo check out my L.O.R.D.S. fic. (they don't fight each other, they fight other people, but they are pretty hard core). New Ignis soon!

[kaybee38]

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[moonstarchild]

Woohoo! Minho and Onew "officially" meet! I can feel that sexual tension in the air! Just go and ravage each other already! Haha, just kidding... maybe.

I so love the snarky banter between Onew and Jonghyun. I think these moments are some of my favorites scenes in your story cause they are so well written, so life like, that I could see it taking place. <3 <3

And I love Sulli here. Truthfully, I would probably do the same in her shoes (hug/molest Minho? Oh yeah!) and be all wide eyed and amazed at the (hot and talented) men that were in the room. Poor Tae though. Could see the steam blowing out at a rapid rate!

Every chapter you post up, I fall even more in love with this story! Good job bebe! <3

[kaybee38]

Awww. thank you thank you! Yes, Tae-Tae is more than a little upset. I also wanted to make sure that peple new that despite everything, Onew and Jjong were still friends. I think everyone can relate to Sulli's fangirling at that moment. ;)