Ignis 10/?

[kaybee38]

Title: Ignis /Chapter 10 - "Stitch In Time"
Author: kaybee38
Rating: PG
Pairings: Minho/Onew, Taemin/Sulli, JongKey, broken!Minho/Yuri
Genre: fantasy, sci-fi, character death
Disclaimer: SHinee is owned by SM Entertainment only
Summary: Teneo are humans that live among us that have a genetic mutation that gives them the ability to live on indefinitely.

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[kaybee38]

spot for stjoan4eva

[stjoan4eva]

I am hyperventalaiting right now, omg, I could easily visualize the way the scene laid out, with everything frozen in such a lovely way...*sighs with nostalgia*

Can I tell you how much I adore your Jinki? Yes? Alright, here we go:

I adore your Jinki like Hiro loves waffles, like Peter loves to be emo, like Mohinder loves science.

And aish! Jjong! Sweetie no, this is not how we make a first impression on a skittish person. You didn't even buy him dinner first! *laughs*

[kaybee38]

BEST.COMMENT.EVER. (so I'll return the love with the following picspam)

[kaybee38]

spot for kinnosuikazura

[kyttenfae]

Yatta! indeed! <33333333333 *giggles* This chapter was simply adorable. *squishes Jinkbb* I love how sheepishly excited and proud he is showing off his abilities, and how awesome his abilities /are/! *bounces* Also Jjong's reactions were hysterical, seriously, lolol. And dawwwww that he took Joongki with him! And I facepalmed massively at Jjong's mode of introduction. Oh Dinopuppy, never change. :P

[kaybee38]

*dances around* I'm really glad you like it Jenn. AND you got my "Heroes" reference! Jinki is rather adorable in this one isn't her? Yes, the raptor overreacted as usual. I set out to make these characters flawed. Just because they have powers, doesn't mean that they make the best decisions all the time.

[kyttenfae]

Also the art turned out so gorgeous! O______________O

[kaybee38]

spot for ellie_eunnie

[ellie_eunnie]

“Hello handsome.”
I'm helplessly hoping for a jongho, tofuho and jongyu pwp end chapter, toppled by keyness
♥

[kaybee38]

*kekekeke* TofuHo is coming soon. and Key will definitely topple a few things. (what's pwp mean?) ---->runs

[ellie_eunnie]

porn without plot ;DDDDDDDDD

[kaybee38]

spot for eijifujiryoma

[eijifujiryoma]

:O First time in my life I'm not a geek after all!

“So what’s you’re brilliant idea? Besides trying to get me to blow chunks?”
Do not ask me what I first thought of when I read this, because for some reason I missed out the 'c' in 'chunks', therefore making it 'hunks'. I'm in desperate need for pr0nz

As he looked up, Onew turned to him mouth full of a huge chocolate walnut chip cookie, eyes smiling into half-moons.

“I wuv deez.”
I love this man.

“Damn he’s tall.”
gigglesnort.

I so thought it was Key who said "Hey, handsome." LOL. But it's nice seeing Jinki ♥ being so protective. Saviour of the innocent and all that, I guess lol. His power is awesome cool. Could do pretty much anything with that sort of ability. Feel sorry for the poor sweetheart though, being alone with no friends except Jjong who counts as half. :P

Anyway, the art is amazing, how do you manage to make such cool ones? ;__; But I just don't like that particular hairstyle XD It's still really pretty tho. ♥

Will be anticipating the next posting! :D

[kaybee38]

LOL "Yata!" in Japanese means like a cross between "Hooray!" an "you did it!" Hiro, a character on Heroes used to say it a lot.

LOL need more pronz? Sounds like to need to spend some more time over at hotel_shinee *kekekeke*

Can't you just see Jinki with a mouth full of cookie grinning like a little kid? I love him too bb. I love him too.

Actually, if you go back to the very first chapter. It's Jonghyun who calls Minho "handsome" first when he wakes up in the ambulance.

Aww. I was trying to hold out and use the new hairstyle, but my layers got merged before I could and so now I can't change it. I think I'll make another won with him and Minho. Hmmm

Gald you like! thanks so much for commenting!

[kaybee38]

spot formoonstarchild

[moonstarchild]

So, my first comment (I deleted it) kinda went haywire with the gift before I realized I accidently changed the dimensions...

Haha! So it was Jjong and Jinki who found Minho! I was thinking it would either be them or Key and I was leaning more towards thinking it was Key. Sneaky sneaky! So Minho almost toppling the poor pyro was just a coincidence? XD

Seriously. I have so much love for this story I might just explode. : D And seriously part II, your photoshop skills make me wanna do inappropriate actions towards my screen...<3

I would comment in more detail, but I should have been in bed, like, four hours ago. It's almost 4:30AM. Why do I do this to myself? XD

The main point of this comment is, basically, I really can't wait for the next chapter! Good job dear!

[kaybee38]

I saw that! At fist, I thought LJ had freaked out on me. Glad it wasn't serious.

Yes! Jongyu find Minho and yes! It was just a "coincidence" that Key was in the alley, and now working at the diner. OR is it? Remember, the diner is very close to the scene of the fire. I like putting little clues throughout the story that come up later. Like Jonghyun calling Minho "handsome" in the ambulance in chapter 1.

Oh no! I hope you've gotten some sleep by the time you read this. Really? I'm just a novice digital artist, and I see all of my flaws, but thank you so much. I really appreciate the compliment. *hands over screen cleaner*