Comments | katwoman_68: Together

katwoman_68

Together - Prompt: Summer

Jun 15, 2009 16:56

Title: Together
Words: 100
Rating: G
Other characters/pairings: James, Albus and Lily
Warnings: none
Author’s Notes: none

( Together )

harry/ginny, drabbles

Comments 14

jamieln612 June 15 2009, 21:06:22 UTC

now it brings my family home

What a great line! I really liked this.

katwoman_68 June 15 2009, 21:27:23 UTC

My first draft of this was well over 150 words. But that was the line that was going to stay in no matter what.

Thanks for reading!

swannygirl7 June 15 2009, 22:52:43 UTC

This was a great addition to Harry's life! I am so happy he got what he always wanted and this drabble shows that. I love it!

katwoman_68 June 17 2009, 01:30:01 UTC

I'm glad you liked it.

I just read something of yours earlier today on ff.net about Ginny's Harpies tryout. I really loved it, but couldn't leave a review because ff.net was being stupid, and I know it was a website problem because I am NOT computer illiterate.

swannygirl7 June 17 2009, 03:25:27 UTC

lol. Thanks! It's nice to hear you enjoyed them.

girlspell June 15 2009, 23:04:03 UTC

Aw...what a sweetheart of a line!

My goodness, what can I say? You can write them!

katwoman_68 June 17 2009, 01:32:24 UTC

Thank you. I'm trying to write some longer stories, but I do like the drabbles. It keeps my brain focused for a while.

I really like your icon. And not just cause it's a cat. I have seen quite a few of your icons and they are all great.

girlspell June 17 2009, 01:37:11 UTC

A lot of my icons are Russian. They know how to make animated icons!

I hope you will write longer stories. :)

delylah June 16 2009, 03:41:11 UTC

Love this! :) I agree with the other comments, the line about the train bringing his family home is just yummy.

katwoman_68 June 17 2009, 01:34:21 UTC

The original line was something to the effect of On September 1, the train used to take me to my family. Now, it brings my family home to me. But, as you know, in 100 word drabbles, we must cut and edit.

Thanks for your review.

delylah June 17 2009, 15:45:18 UTC

Oh, yes, that would have been a nice touch. But yeah, that's part of what makes it fun is figuring out where to cut it so that the picture you wanted to portray is still there, and I think it is. Good job! :D

danfan74 June 16 2009, 13:52:49 UTC

most excellent. I agree the train comment about bringing his family home, is perfect.

katwoman_68 June 17 2009, 01:37:45 UTC

Thanks for reading. As you can tell, I like the line, too.

Every time I see your icon pop up in a reviewer comment, I'm reminded that I need to read your story that has the handfasting in it. It has been added to my ever-growing list of stuff to read.

danfan74 June 17 2009, 04:35:26 UTC

Well, you COULD read it by itself but you'd be better off reading it's prequel Innocence Lost first. You can find it at my journal, just look for the appropriate tags. And thanks for adding it to your TO DO list