I REALLY like this one. ^____^ I am personally one for criptic poems. I think if you removed the "It's the darkness in me," which is kinda explanatory of the whole poem, it would be really awesome. But it's up to you, that's just what I like.
But yeah, what can I say? I seriously love this. A lot a lot. Beautiful use of adjectives to describe, wonderful choices. Awesomely spiffing, mon ami. :D
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I am personally one for criptic poems. I think if you removed the "It's the darkness in me," which is kinda explanatory of the whole poem, it would be really awesome. But it's up to you, that's just what I like.
But yeah, what can I say? I seriously love this. A lot a lot. Beautiful use of adjectives to describe, wonderful choices. Awesomely spiffing, mon ami. :D
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