Comments | katiebugs18: Fic: 'Spiraling Down'

katiebugs18

Fic: 'Spiraling Down'

Jul 05, 2007 23:02

I've been working on this for a while now and I feel I should warn everyone that it deals with some rather uncomfortable situations so if you don't want to read anything like that don't read this. There's a bit more of an explanation under the cut.

Update: Seriously, could I be anymore melodramatic? Probably but that's neither here nor there. I ( Read more... )

bsg fic, kara/lee

Comments 26

mylittlepwny July 8 2007, 17:18:53 UTC

Guh.
This made me cry and supremely happy all in one sitting.

10/10.

katiebugs18 July 13 2007, 00:24:42 UTC

It is a bit emotional isn't it. Thanks so much. I really appreciate it.

tcy_11215 July 13 2007, 10:45:01 UTC

I liked it. I can buy into the idea of Lee and Kara dancing the 'pain is pleasure' dance.

Thanks for writing.

katiebugs18 July 15 2007, 08:15:00 UTC

They are the perfect candidates for the whole 'pain is pleasure' thing... especially considering that in 'Unfinished Business' they beat the crap out of each other before they can admit that they missed each other.

Thank you so much for reading. I really really appreciate it.

becisvolatile July 13 2007, 12:29:20 UTC

This is appallingly wonderful. I'm freaked that I even liked it.

Seriously. Takes a bit of skill to have someone reading thinking "Fuck, this is wrong" the whole time... but still reading.

I didn't even want to stop. It made a nice sort of sense to me. So... uh... thanks?

katiebugs18 July 15 2007, 08:12:25 UTC

Ummm I'm kinda freaked out that I even wrote it. I almost didn't post it because I was so freaked out by it but I figured what the hell.

Thank you so much for reading. It means a lot to me considering how dark it is. Seriously, I can't express how much I appreciate this kind of feedback.

spinkkitty July 13 2007, 19:12:40 UTC

WOW. highly disturbing and amazing and i loved every frakking minute of it.

katiebugs18 July 15 2007, 08:16:26 UTC

Thank you so much. They are so fucked up I can barely stand it sometimes...which is when things like this come out. Happy fic next time, I promise.

alissabobissa July 14 2007, 03:29:27 UTC

Wow, this is all kinds of wrong but really fantastic! I sort of read this mesmerized by the pain and cruelty and despair of it all. I think you definitely got the emotions right. Gods, they are just both so frakked up! Thanks for sharing.

katiebugs18 July 15 2007, 08:09:37 UTC

They are ridiculously fucked up. Especially around the time of 'Unfinished Business' which is where I placed this. I mean, they beat each other to a pulp because they were in so much pain and couldn't communicate with each other. I want to hit them over the head and throw them in a closet somewhere and make them actually communicate with each other.

Thank you so so much for reading. I really appreciate it, especially with this piece.