Comments | katara_zuko: The Visit part one

bushtuckerboy in katara_zuko

The Visit part one

Aug 11, 2008 23:29

The re-visit to the western air temple was not quite what Katara ever expected, gone was the comfortable solitude and intimacy of friends and family, replaced by the flat solitude and isolation of Aang and hers “co-habitation”, which was further replaced by the bustle of engineers and craftsmen rebuilding and making safe what they could. It had ( Read more... )

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mshepnj August 13 2008, 11:20:37 UTC

Sleazy pick-up line is sleazy.

LOL, I suppose he could have said something like "Hey baby wanna breed with me?"

Of course, the suggestion means nothing without the equipment to pull it off.

filia_umbrae August 11 2008, 17:50:04 UTC

Absolutely delightful. I really like the structure and the characterization.

Great job (also, I LOL'd)!

jsuis_la_suisse August 11 2008, 18:16:27 UTC

Seriously. They should just admit that they love each other :)

LOVED IT! ♥

...and favorited :)

makeitsimple1oo August 11 2008, 20:49:08 UTC

MELON LORD, HOW I LOVE THEE!

awesome job. xD I'm completely reminded of H/Hr and their own platonic relationship, weirdly.

oh thing though (and it's just me being anal) Sparky/Sugar Queen are nicknames yes, but they're still names-- they're supposed to be treated as such. XD

other than that... MOAR PLZK.

turtleyurtle1 August 11 2008, 22:47:20 UTC

OH HAI I LOVE YOUR ICON.

makeitsimple1oo August 12 2008, 08:44:12 UTC

OH HAI THANKS. I REQUESTED IT BUT RICOCHET91 MADE IT.

AND AFTER ZUKO SAID THAT, KATARA ENDED UP RAVASHING HIM IN HIS TENT NEXT TO A SLEEPING AANG. 8D

bushtuckerboy August 12 2008, 04:58:36 UTC

FIXED!
and agreed about the icon, H/Hr, uh harry potter? i can't say i ever got into it, much prefer discworld.
and MOAR is on the way, give me a day or 2.

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turtleyurtle1 August 11 2008, 22:46:43 UTC

This is so many levels of amazing hilarity.

There's gonna be A PART TWO!?!?!?
OMGOMGOMG.

YAY!

I love the last line btw. I mean....really. XD

And Aang's sleazyness it priceless.

But Zuko is funnier.

bushtuckerboy August 12 2008, 04:55:24 UTC

i'm a slow writer but good reviews are like red bull laced with amphetamines.

turtleyurtle1 August 12 2008, 12:14:08 UTC

XD

Consider that my amazing speed! then.

:)

bushtuckerboy August 12 2008, 13:02:44 UTC

if you want i'll submit what i have written so far before i go to bed tonight, which is in a couple of hours (australian)

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