Sherlock Ficlet: Out of the Desert

Sep 15, 2016 18:05

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Title: Out of the Desert
Author: kat_lair/ Mistress Kat
Fandom: Sherlock
Pairing: none or John/Sherlock depending on your goggles
Rating: PG
Word count: 173
Disclaimer: Not mine, only playing

Summary: Dreaming and waking up, then and now.

Author notes: pushkin666 and I wrote ficlets to same fandom and prompt (for this one the prompt was ‘nightmares’)

Out of the Desert )

sherlock, my fanfiction

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milly_gal September 16 2016, 08:30:26 UTC
Oh.My.God!

*covers the gaping whole in my chest*

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kat_lair September 16 2016, 21:43:32 UTC
Aww and here I thought this finished on a hopeful note... :D

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milly_gal September 17 2016, 13:36:16 UTC
lol! There is but still, my heart clenched!

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pushkin666 September 16 2016, 19:18:15 UTC
Oh that hurts. Poor John but at least he has Sherlock to take him away from the nightmares. Excellent writing hun and very nearly a drabble :)

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kat_lair September 16 2016, 21:46:12 UTC
Thank you sweetie. I didn't think it was that angsty but okay, re-reading it... yeah, a bit of tellingly raw emotion there John.

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theantipam September 20 2016, 20:54:04 UTC
My praise for this would be longer than the actual fic. Just the Best!

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kat_lair September 21 2016, 10:16:06 UTC
Well by all means, go ahead! :D Thank you very much for your lovely comment, much appreciated.

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arianedevere September 21 2016, 10:11:09 UTC
Oh. *woobies* That was heart-wrenching. And very beautiful. Love, love, love the last sentence in particular.

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kat_lair September 21 2016, 10:17:38 UTC
Oh thank you so much <3 Your comment really made me smile. Special thanks for pointing out that the last sentence worked, I love hearing if there is a particular section that touches the reader :)

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margaret_r September 25 2016, 11:53:02 UTC
So descriptive and painful with such a beautiful ending. I just love the thought of Sherlock's music bringing comfort to John.

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kat_lair October 4 2016, 20:53:27 UTC
Thank you very much! This was very visual for me yes, glad that came through. And I'm a sucker for the trope where music used to convey feelings so it was only right to use it here.

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