It seems that I didn't comment on this fic in the challenge com! I tried to be a good commenter because I cherish all Lewis fics *cuddles all the awesome fics*
It shouldn't be a surprise to you that I loved this! "Undercover as gay" is my favourite trope and I can never get enough of it. :) Loved your pacing of this story, letting the reader see both POVs and how they pine for each other! And I adored your flirty OFC with her comment about bisexuality. And that kiss.... what a first kiss!
I haven't even managed to read most of the fics on the exchange yet as currently distracted by all the long H/D I can get my hands on, lol.
And hee, no it's not a surprise you're a fan of the trope but it is a pleasure to hear you liked the fic. Thank you very much for the detailed comments! Glad the changing pov work, and the kiss was totally self-indulgent of course. And lol, Abbie is clearly awesome and I may need to slip her into other fics to have adventures.
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It shouldn't be a surprise to you that I loved this! "Undercover as gay" is my favourite trope and I can never get enough of it. :) Loved your pacing of this story, letting the reader see both POVs and how they pine for each other! And I adored your flirty OFC with her comment about bisexuality. And that kiss.... what a first kiss!
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And hee, no it's not a surprise you're a fan of the trope but it is a pleasure to hear you liked the fic. Thank you very much for the detailed comments! Glad the changing pov work, and the kiss was totally self-indulgent of course. And lol, Abbie is clearly awesome and I may need to slip her into other fics to have adventures.
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