Supernatural Drabble Sequence: be a burning star

Sep 30, 2011 19:32

Title: be a burning star
Author: Mistress Kat / kat_lair
Fandom: Supernatural
Pairing: Dean/Sam
Genre: Drabble sequence
Rating: PG-13
Warnings/enticements: implied character death
Word count: 3x100
Disclaimer: Not mine, just playing.

Prompt: Written for Summer of Evil challenge over at evilsam_spn as a response to prompt by pushkin666 who wanted to see Dean fighting alongside Sam, ( Read more... )

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pushkin666 September 30 2011, 20:49:55 UTC
Oh thank you so much. This fits in really well with the song. I think of the three the first drabble is my favourite, and particularly this line - The war is over and grace covers the Earth like snow.. The love between them is so strong in this.

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kat_lair September 30 2011, 21:06:24 UTC
Oh yay, I'm really happy you liked it. I was pleased with that sentence to so... *scuffs toes* And yeah, it's the kind of love that burns right through good and evil :)

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weekendgothgirl October 1 2011, 03:09:20 UTC
They were amazing! I love the twist of Sam being evil but working with Dean and there were some beautiful phrases.
The fire in their hearts blazes strong; brighter than either good or evil. <33

The fics fit the song wonderfully and were really well written.

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kat_lair October 1 2011, 07:56:23 UTC
Oh wow, thank you so much! I'm especially glad they fitted the song because I was trying to go with that 'fight to the end' feeling of it. And you picked a sentence <3___<3 I love it when people do that, makes my ego all squirmy :D Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.

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weekendgothgirl October 1 2011, 21:54:23 UTC
Dude, I make time for your fics XD It took me ages to find one I liked the most too ^.^

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kat_lair October 2 2011, 13:57:20 UTC
Flattery will get you to places... :D

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mihka_mc October 4 2011, 16:19:59 UTC
Wow!

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kat_lair October 4 2011, 19:49:28 UTC
Thank you very much :)

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halfshellvenus October 4 2011, 19:07:02 UTC
There were just stunning, both as drabbles and as a story arc.

I love the language here, especially and the sweet burn of choices, especially the wrong ones. and the imagery of the ashy outline of their wings marring the gate.

The concluding line is both strong and lyrically delicious.

Nicely done!

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kat_lair October 4 2011, 21:19:57 UTC
Oh wow, thank you so much *beams at you* I'm so pleased you liked the drabbles. And thank you for such detailed commentary on the lines as well, I love it when people point out if a particular line worked for them. <3

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keerawa October 20 2011, 07:26:19 UTC
There are no shades of grey anymore; not outside their ragtag group of fools, refusing to be forgotten or forgiven.

*whistles* Powerful, and your descriptions really made an impression on me.

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kat_lair October 20 2011, 17:39:19 UTC
Thank you so much, especially for pointing out which line particularly worked for you. I'm super pleased to hear you liked these.

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