Bandom Fic: just be good to me

Sep 12, 2010 13:22


Porn for Sunday!

Title: just be good to me
Author: Mistress Kat / kat_lair 
Fandom: Bandom, Fall Out Boy
Pairing/Category: Patrick/Pete, PWPish (there are feelings, sorry about that)
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Porn with a definite d/s vibe.
Word count: 2,481
Disclaimer: Not true, only playing.
Summary: Only with Patrick, Pete says ‘please’ like it matters, like it’s ( Read more... )

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justtothesea September 12 2010, 13:06:07 UTC
aah, this was excellent. I really loved their relationship in this, such a great read, thank you!

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kat_lair September 12 2010, 13:53:56 UTC
Aw, thank you very much! This fic turned out very different from what I was intending (much angstier for start), so I'm not sure yet how I feel about it but if it worked for you then I'm glad :)

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jk_rockin September 12 2010, 14:14:19 UTC
NNNNGGGH. THAT WAS AWESOME. I love the subtlety of the vibe here; it really is about more than sex, but the sex is hot. Nice.

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kat_lair September 12 2010, 15:53:56 UTC
Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I kind of just wanted to write some porn but apparently I'm incapable or doing straight up pwps as other stuff always creeps in.

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oikkuni September 12 2010, 16:34:29 UTC
There’s no question how things are going to end up tonight. He tightens his grip on Pete’s jacket and hauls him close. “We’re leaving now,” he grits out, voice gravelly from the continued use. “Say your goodbyes.”

Pete inhales and Patrick feels it like his own, their chests pressed together briefly before Patrick takes a measured step back, letting Pete go. For now.

just. unngh. the anticipation. *___*

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kat_lair September 12 2010, 18:07:45 UTC
Well, they do say that anticipation is 75% of the pleasure... :D Aw, you go and quote stuff, you know that makes me duck my head and mumble at the floor. Thank you very much.

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snuffkin September 12 2010, 16:42:24 UTC
hmm I like ♥

And feelings is what makes the pwp interesting, I think. just plain fucking is usually rather boring.

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kat_lair September 12 2010, 18:06:14 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it. And yes, I agree. It's just that I was hoping for some less complicated and less angsty feelings, but the fic didn't cooperate.

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pushkin666 September 12 2010, 21:17:11 UTC
See I still love this. It's raw, and dirty and very hot but also there's so much love, need and promise within it as well.

I'm actually glad it's now PWP. I'm not a huge fan of PWP. There should always be feelings, even in porn.

So I'm gonna make you squirm a little by quoting back bits I particularly liked *g*

He reaches a hand and wraps his fingers around the butter soft leather of Pete’s jacket, not doing anything else yet, just keeping them both anchored.

Sometimes, they don’t bother looking all that hard, for safer alternatives. Sometimes, Patrick forgets why they even should.

Patrick has never been able to deny Pete what he needs. What he wants, yes, but not what he truly needs.

Only with Patrick, Pete says ‘please’ like it matters, like it’s a question with an uncertain outcome. And only with Pete does Patrick know how to answer it.

“Or the last,” Patrick adds. He doesn’t mean to make it sound like a promise, but it comes out like one anyway.

Also you had leather ... leather Kat. *fans self*

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kat_lair September 13 2010, 08:57:41 UTC
I don't know what it is about this fic, but I'm still not hugely keen on it myself. *shrugs*

But before you smack me, let me say that I full acknowledge as valid your opinion that this is the best thing since tea was invented or whatever *g*

And oh babe, you with the quoting... Yes, squirming with pleasure and flapping my hands.

Of course I had leather. After all, there was lots of leather in the video... Knew you'd enjoy those bits :D

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