Supernatural fanfic: every line is the second last

[kat_lair]

Oh Dear... You see I needed another fandom like a hole in the head. A fandom that finally broke my incest squick I needed about as much as a shotgun blast of rock salt in the head. Which, apparently, was a lot.

Title: every line is the second last
Author: Mistress Kat /

Comments

[angstslashhope]

Wow, great first fic! I love the non-linear narrative, you did it really well - not making it incredibly obvious but not making it confusing either.

welcome to the fandom!!

[kat_lair]

Thank you! I'm relieved the reversed timeline worked, I wasn't planning on it in the first place but in the end it became obvious that it was the best way to structure the story.

Thanks for the lovely comment and the warm welcome!

[moth2fic]

Have saved to read later.

[kat_lair]

cool, hope you enjoy.

[kellifer_fic]

This is lovely.

[kat_lair]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

[xtinethepirate]

Lovely! Very visual, and the skewed timeline gives it a dream-like quality. Lovely writing, and welcome to the fandom!

[kat_lair]

oooh, thank you for the lovely comment and the welcome. I'm so happy the timeline thing worked *wipes brow*

[destina]

Mmmm. I love the ending, because you carry through the theme of lines crossed, barriers broken down, things that were once seen as wrong now just one more thing they do, and then -- then the kick to the gut, at the end. The shades of grey are suddenly not quite so vague, anymore. Wonderful stuff.

[kat_lair]

*claps hands gleefully* Oh, yes, that's what I'm talking about! Thank you for the lovely, insightful comment. I'm so happy the feel of what I wanted to say came through in the story. Thanks for reading and leaving feedback, it means a lot.