Wine Tasting

[kat_elric]

Wine TastingIn China, Kyuhyun finds it’s all about sharp lines and angles. The stark hotel rooms, coupled with his long limbs, give the entire event a feeling of rushed roughness. It’s harsh and fast like wine that is bitter and bites on his tongue but settles well in the pit of his stomach. The language that he pretends to know nothing of, he

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[takchik]

lol another story i just loved XD..... i feel like a stalker ;_ ; but your storys are really good ^_^ and i just have to spaz about this line vv

“Sungmin! Zhou mi!” the voice of the leader drifts through the thin hotel walls. “If you broke Kyuhyun you are all in so much trouble tomorrow! Don’t even think about another round!
OMG that line right there was just made of win and awesome....also let me know i was right with guessing who the 'wines' were XD i feel great knowing i got then right lol

[kat_elric]

I don't mind if you stalk. It makes me feel special.

*laughs* I had to bring Leeteuk into this. I'm glad you were able to figure out who the wines were. I tried to make it so that it would be clear without coming right out and saying it.

[kimiri_elric]

spot

[kimiri_elric]

I am slow, even the fic that you wrote for me. At least I have read it already.

So I see that you are tring to do the it's smut but it's kinda vague kinda thing. I like it, it works. Its not really dirty or really smutty that way. I love how you made them wines, I always wanted a wine fic after Sungmins one cyworld entry. I was almost dieing when Leeteuk yelled at them though. That was epic.

I give you 5 stars or two thumbs up or whatever you like for this.

[kat_elric]

I'm glad you liked it. I was a bit worried I would get a "This isn't smut!" response. Like I told you I don't know where this came from, it just popped in there.

Oh come on. What are the chances that any of them can sleep together and get away with it without anyone else knowing? Not even Heechul is that brilliant.

Thanks sissy

[ginina_desu]

OOO A MinKyuMi fic?? Why thank you for a fix of KyuMin+Mi while I angst over the situation in FTSTTS.

Due to my lack of understanding English (not really), its like your personifying different types of wine into people yet they are people?? Arghh I dont know how to explain it.. Well I know you've made ZhouMi and Sungmin into different types of wine and thats how Kyuhyun perceives them as(?)

“Sungmin! Zhou mi!” the voice of the leader drifts through the thin hotel walls. “If you broke Kyuhyun you are all in so much trouble tomorrow! Don’t even think about another round! We have a show tomorrow! Sleep!”

AHAHAHHA~ Oh the all knowing leader had to stop them

[kat_elric]

*laughs* See that is a good point of this.

This would be a bit confusing if you didn't have a super good grasp of English. It is set up as a metaphor. It is really about Zhoumi and Sungmin and has nothing to do with wine but that is a way to represent them sort of like wine. It's kinda hard to explain but I think you have the main gist of it.

Yep the 'all knowing, in the next room that probably heard their first round anyway' leader, has to put his foot down.

[ginina_desu]

LOL a metaphor. God, I study advanced English and I can't even analyze anything properly anymore. And this is the reason I stick to my sciences, maths and technology casue there's alwasy ONE answer in the end. I'm not one to think really open endedly when reading.

[kat_elric]

*laughs* No worries. I totally understand you on the math and tech thing. My major is math and my minor is English... what that means for how my brain works, I have no idea. ^_^

[silentdictator]

The end was priceless. :D

[kat_elric]

Thank you. I think everyone might enjoy that. ^_^

[iconusa]

I laughed so hard at “If you broke Kyuhyun you are all in so much trouble tomorrow! Don’t even think about another round! We have a show tomorrow! Sleep!” that I scared my family.
It's probably because I am a retard but I had to re-read the first two paragraphs to see that it was Zhou mi and Sungmin that were being talked about, but then I thought it was clever. Good job.

I wonder why she did better...

[kat_elric]

*laughs* I'm glad you enjoyed it. Your not a retard. I wrote it to be a little ambiguous.

She probably did better because I am bribing her... or maybe because she actually studied.