AN: Here is the moment that most of you have been waiting for, the big battle! I hope this doesn't disappoint. Also make sure you read the authors note at the bottom. I have goodies for you all!
Well.. from the beginning is appropriate I suppose. -clears throat- okay, here goes.
The fight scene was brilliant; the start with Henry being shielded to Yesung’s illusions and Suju winning against the other group was fantastic. Such great imagery! (Really, I adore fics that has amazing imagery and a nice way of flowing from one scene to another. Which, uh, you do fantastically! 8D)
And then the party, Yunho bringing smuggles alcohol (what a daredevil angel lol), the couples being lovey-dovey and the KyuMinDong’s reaction to it was so funny. BUT! The real captivating section of this chapter HAD to be that GIANT twist! I mean, it’s all sweet, steamy with HanChul and then BAM!!!!!! Hankyung goes all badass and tries to kill his love! I mean, it can’t get any exciting for suspenseful after that!!!
And no, I was dense enough to not know the hints you dropped. =____+;;; And I’m lazy enough to not go back and read them all to be completely honest. Hehe ^^U
BUT OH MY SHISUS. No matter how amazing and how much I want to bow down at your feet, I can’t leave out the agonizing parts of reading this!!! Dx WHY? WHY HANKYUNG?! What happened to him? D8 What? Oh gosh, it’s not going to happen to the other members, is it? I mean, then half the team will be corrupted and as Yesung showed, some members will not show mercy and, and and and -breaks down to an incoherent mess- (Look what you have made me into…)
Wow.. this is a lo~~ong comment… oops. Sorry (starts singing Sorry Sorry) didn’t mean it to go on like this.
^^b Thumbs up!!! Can’t wait for more *w* You, quite literally, have me waiting at the edge of my seat for more.
I'm so glad you liked it. I thought it was pretty epic when it just popped into my head and I'm glad I conveyed it well enough to you. (Thanks for saying that, it is very good to hear.)
I love the fact that I was able to add that twist and do it in a way that people way or may not see it coming but that it was surprising to everyone. I don't blame you for not wanting to go back and read it all. lol. It is a lot to read. I will probably post the hints that I dropped when all is said and done.
I'm not going to answer any of your questions right now. The next chapter will answer most or them for you.
*laughs* I don't mind long comments. They make me really excited! Be careful not to fall off your seat! ^_^
and SQUEEE i'm listening to your OST right now... *w* SO GOOD. i love all the songs (great great choices might i add) and i love the album cover and the background the lyrics were on. very creative -thumbs up-
lol fall of my seat. i just may with all this anticipation and excitement bubbling in me x)
Well.. from the beginning is appropriate I suppose. -clears throat- okay, here goes.
The fight scene was brilliant; the start with Henry being shielded to Yesung’s illusions and Suju winning against the other group was fantastic. Such great imagery! (Really, I adore fics that has amazing imagery and a nice way of flowing from one scene to another. Which, uh, you do fantastically! 8D)
And then the party, Yunho bringing smuggles alcohol (what a daredevil angel lol), the couples being lovey-dovey and the KyuMinDong’s reaction to it was so funny. BUT! The real captivating section of this chapter HAD to be that GIANT twist! I mean, it’s all sweet, steamy with HanChul and then BAM!!!!!! Hankyung goes all badass and tries to kill his love! I mean, it can’t get any exciting for suspenseful after that!!!
And no, I was dense enough to not know the hints you dropped. =____+;;; And I’m lazy enough to not go back and read them all to be completely honest. Hehe ^^U
BUT OH MY SHISUS. No matter how amazing and how much I want to bow down at your feet, I can’t leave out the agonizing parts of reading this!!! Dx WHY? WHY HANKYUNG?! What happened to him? D8 What? Oh gosh, it’s not going to happen to the other members, is it? I mean, then half the team will be corrupted and as Yesung showed, some members will not show mercy and, and and and -breaks down to an incoherent mess- (Look what you have made me into…)
Wow.. this is a lo~~ong comment… oops. Sorry (starts singing Sorry Sorry) didn’t mean it to go on like this.
^^b Thumbs up!!! Can’t wait for more *w*
You, quite literally, have me waiting at the edge of my seat for more.
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I love the fact that I was able to add that twist and do it in a way that people way or may not see it coming but that it was surprising to everyone. I don't blame you for not wanting to go back and read it all. lol. It is a lot to read. I will probably post the hints that I dropped when all is said and done.
I'm not going to answer any of your questions right now. The next chapter will answer most or them for you.
*laughs* I don't mind long comments. They make me really excited! Be careful not to fall off your seat! ^_^
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and SQUEEE i'm listening to your OST right now... *w* SO GOOD. i love all the songs (great great choices might i add) and i love the album cover and the background the lyrics were on. very creative -thumbs up-
lol fall of my seat. i just may with all this anticipation and excitement bubbling in me x)
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lol. I'll bring the band aids!
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