All Wrong, and Yet All Right: Chapter One

[kat_elric]

Here is chapter one of my Bleach fic that I am currently writing. This chapter is HollowIchigo/Ishida. It will eventually be Ichigo/Ishida.

Comments

[madrona_8]

That's pretty twisted...I like it! It figures that Ishida would finally figure out how to get around Shiro.

Little spelling fix: it's semen, not seamen. ;)

[kat_elric]

Ishida does have his brains working in favor for him.

lol. Thanks for the spelling catch I fixed it I think. Somehow that was never one of my spelling words in school. ^_^

[madrona_8]

Yeah, mine either...can you imagine....? What would the sample sentence be?

[kat_elric]

Nothing appropriate, or nothing that didn't produce a wealth of childlike giggles. I think the teacher would receive more calls from parents then any teacher wants. Hey my roommate is student teaching English... I wonder if I could get her to field test this one for us...

[madrona_8]

Depends on the grade. MY daughter is in 7th and I know this year is "life sciences" so ya know...it's giggle and blush time.