[Fic] Reborn!: Cure for Shock

[kasugai_gummie]

12 Days of Christmas Meme
DAY 07

Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Prompt: 6918, Culture Shock
Requester: runesque
Warnings: UNEDITED, very little dialogue, tense issues?

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Title: Cure for Shock

Series/Characters: [Reborn!] Mukuro/Hibari (blink-and-you-miss... like all my recent attempts at

Comments

[butterflycages]

I didn't really notice anything popping out about the tense, so I think you're okay. And I love your 6918 characterization, because that initial re-acquaintance banter aka Hibari ready to tear Mukuro a new one? HOT. XD

[kasugai_gummie]

Okay... so it was just me then? v_v Hate being so anal about these things, yegads. Glad my characterizations are still sound though. ♥

[celadonite]

Oh, Tsuna, what have you done to Italy by sending Hibari there? XD If anything, this sure made up for the anti-climatic 6918 in the canon.

[kasugai_gummie]

The best word to describe what he's done to Italy by sending on over Hibari is "condemned" it. XDDD

I find it horribly unfair that 6918 gets no service whatsoever from its creator. :(

[runesque]

I find it horribly unfair that 6918 gets no service whatsoever from its creator.

This is something I'd normally reserve for webclaps, but I'm so disappointed with their physical (as in NOT illusion XD) reunion so far =(. Is it too much to hope for something a bit more on par with the D18 reunion... Okay, maybe that is hoping too much.

[kasugai_gummie]

I noticed you've been ranting more in "public" lately (and truth-be-told, I approve! XD)

Anyway, ditto, ditto. That single "we'll continue this conversation later" was possibly the single most pathetic bone tossed out ever. I mean, MukuHiba as a ship has been around since Kokuyou, and if you can get fandom to wave and crest over Squalo/Hibari with two-panels, shouldn't an established pairing get something more? We're still here, hellooooo. :\ It's irksome.

[runesque]

NUOVO NAMIMORIO

Gawd you have me slain XDDDDD

S-slightly more readworthy comment later.

[kasugai_gummie]

If I've managed to slay you even the slightest bit, then I'm satisfied! ♥

[izkariote]

I LOVE YOU.

Good 6918 fics are so hard to come by these days. ♥♥♥

[kasugai_gummie]

ILU2BB ♥♥♥

6918 in general is so underappreciated these days. So, so underappreciated. /sad

[izkariote]

One of my friends thinks that it's because the canon never really built up the love before Dino's entrance. Hence, D18 got all the attention and 6918 is sort of just... there.

I love violent pairings like this one though. ;w;

[kye_kestrel]

--"Sawada and his herd" sounds like such an interesting metaphor for "Tsuna and his harem".

--Your Hibari is amazingly bloodthirsty. ♥ There's this disdain, the first time he went to Italy, and then you narrated how he got used to Italy on his second visit, only he dealt with his homesickness by doing lots and lots of property damage, and I absolutely loved how you went through Ryohei and Yamamoto and Gokudera and described how they all made the situation worse. XD

--Also, I never realized until now that "nonsensical" is the perfect word to describe Mukuro's pineapple top. It doesn't have any purpose except for identifying him in that Vongola Festival spot-the-silhouette minigame.

[kasugai_gummie]

-- LMAO OMG, I'll have you know I almost did use "harem" instead of "herd"... but then belatedly realised that that would be a grossly OOC word choice for Hibari to use and changed it.

-- I'm glad. ;^; Writing Hibari is always an exercise in misanthropy and worldly disdain. ♥

It doesn't have any purpose except for identifying him in that Vongola Festival spot-the-silhouette minigame.
/laaaaaughs, and laaaaughs, and laaaaaaughs XDDDDDDDD

[kye_kestrel]

--Well, we all know what it actually means, so the word choice is just there to fit your character's POV.

/laaaaaughs, and laaaaughs, and laaaaaaughs XDDDDDDDD
-- It dooooeeees! Well, he's not the only one who has that pineapple top since Chrome has the same hairstyle, but Mukuro has a sharper chin compared to her, so all you need to do is choose the pineapple with the pointed bottom. 8D