Comments | kastari: ~BSG: Reluctant Partners, Part 2: Mystery Road

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~BSG: Reluctant Partners, Part 2: Mystery Road

Sep 29, 2010 00:26

Title: Reluctant Partners, Part 2: Mystery Road
Author: kastari
Summary: Hang on tight we might miss the curve.
Characters: Adama/Roslin
Rating: T
Word Count: 300
Author’s Note: Written for the 28th ar_drabbles challenge. Prompt: Sequel
Original Fic Link: Reluctant Partners
Disclaimer: I’m just playing in Universal’s sandbox.

( Voiceover: In the criminal justice system, sexually based offenses are considered especially heinous. In Caprica City, the dedicated detectives who investigate these vicious felonies are members of an elite squad known as the Special Victims Unit. These are their stories. )

adama/roslin, drabble challenge, ar_drabbles, drabble, bsg

Comments 26

vash26 September 29 2010, 08:45:02 UTC

Great that you picked this one for the sequel challenge, I love this little universe.

The coffee here tastes like algae.”

“Jake?”

“I really loved that dog.”

I love all these little refrences.

kastari October 10 2010, 06:25:06 UTC

I seem to have acquired a fan base with this a/u. I think it's gonna be my 'main squeeze' for sequels. The people demand it. That & that damn little Puss n' Boots icon mibehl uses kills me.

So happy you love the universe. : )

frakcancer September 29 2010, 10:00:01 UTC

“It’s not exactly a babe magnet.”

“I wear it to keep them at bay.”

Oh, Bill, honey, it's so nice to meet a confident man.

kastari October 10 2010, 06:26:46 UTC

So Say We All.

He's such a Real Man of the Fleet. ♥

Hee!

un_crayon_rouge September 29 2010, 10:32:45 UTC

Totally adorable.

kastari October 10 2010, 06:27:12 UTC

*hugs*

: )

sczep84 September 29 2010, 12:32:42 UTC

“It’s not exactly a babe magnet.”

“I wear it to keep them at bay.” *giggle fit* Ahhhh, now it makes sense why he always wore the damn ring.

Loved this! Especially that u used so many lines from the show. Brilliant!

kastari October 10 2010, 06:28:29 UTC

Part of my challenge is to see how I can weave canon into the a/u.

Bill is such a ladies man. *snort*

♥ for always reading.

sln1 September 29 2010, 14:31:34 UTC

It is interesting that so many of us chose to write sequels to our AU fics, not to mention gratifying since that AU challenge threw up so many intriguing new worlds and gave us all a great deal of fun.

Once again you have managed to skilfully blend canon into this very different scenario keeping the characters recognisable and integrating the familiar lines of dialogue so cleverly all the while cramming in plenty of backstory and progressing the plot and character relationships in just 300 words.

This really is very well done. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you.

kastari October 10 2010, 06:37:02 UTC

I was not/am not a fan of the a/u challenge/universe. But what a sweet little deal the a/u & the sequel challenge have been. Now I actually hope there will be more since you are right--so many people did create them & I, too, want all the stories to continue. My goal is to weave canon into my story & keep the a/u Adama & Roslin true to their original characters. If I jump the track, they become unrecognizable. It's that 100, 200 & 300 word restriction that can be a killer. Especially since technically each installment must stand alone.

Having great fun creating as I go.

You are most welcome & thanks for always reading.

sln1 October 10 2010, 15:59:30 UTC

I can pretty much say ditto to everything you wrote here ( ... )