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~BSG: Trinity

Apr 05, 2010 20:11

Title: Trinity
Author: kastari
Summary: She doesn’t remember the last time they made love.
Characters: Adama/Roslin
Rating: T
Word Count: 200
Author’s Note: Written for the 3rd ar_drabbles challenge. Prompt: Body parts--elbow.
Disclaimer: I’m just playing in Universal’s sandbox.

( He wishes he could ease her pain. )

adama/roslin, drabble challenge, ar_drabbles, drabbles, drabble, bsg

Comments 25

redrockcan April 6 2010, 04:17:12 UTC

I have to say again I just love your fics. You always have a little edge to it and yet still it's beautiful and touching. The reality of this scene just reaches right into my heart and squeezes.

kastari April 7 2010, 03:46:27 UTC

*blush*

Thank you so much. Knowing readers enjoy what you do = confidence & the desire to continue.

And heart squeezing--what a wonderful squeeze it is.

frakcancer April 6 2010, 04:52:01 UTC

I think you just broke my heart. You know why as well as I do.

kastari April 7 2010, 04:06:27 UTC

Payback for breaking mine.

We can always hold hands.

And wibble together.

sczep84 April 6 2010, 05:10:36 UTC

Beautiful *wibbles* Just beautiful *claps*

kastari April 7 2010, 04:15:43 UTC

I wibbled the whole while I wrote it.

Thank you for your beautiful.

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kastari April 7 2010, 04:34:03 UTC

You outta the bed yet?

Yes, I was going for the cry.

Crying is cleansing. Or so they say.

Just know you're not alone.

bsg_aussiegirl April 6 2010, 07:42:37 UTC

I'm going to have to get one of you Yanks to explain the macaroni/elbow thing to me, aren't I? Is it the shape? Do you call it elbow pasta or something? *feeling stupid and confused*

Anyway - other than the constant macaroni references that have appeared for this prompt - I love the drabble.

I love the part when he had wanted for her to be in his bed for days. So sad.

lacklusterfic April 6 2010, 12:00:34 UTC

Thank you for lightening the mood a little! :-D Yep, over here, the box usually says "elbow macaroni", or sometimes just "elbows".

Now I'm imagining how puzzled you must have been to see all these references to pasta, and I'm not nearly as sad anymore. ;-)

bsg_aussiegirl April 6 2010, 12:21:33 UTC

Well I'm glad I'm here for comic relief!

I have heard of elbow pasta (I think - vaguely familiar) but never ever elbow macaroni. Will need to check the pasta section again.

kastari April 7 2010, 04:41:04 UTC

Hoping you've got the macaroni thing down now.

Thank you for the love.

Endings are sometimes sad...