Comments | kassidy62: SPN story: The Other End (What's Left of You That I Don't Have), part 1

kassidy62

SPN story: The Other End (What's Left of You That I Don't Have), part 1

Jun 19, 2012 08:50

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spn: that phone call, non-con, spn fanfiction, lilith, spn_illuminated, castiel, spn, bobby, ruby, hurt!sam, powers!sam, dean, writing, wincest, violence

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doneitall June 20 2012, 20:17:17 UTC

Okay, this was horrible. Not the writing, because it was good. Very bueno is the writing. The way it made me feel was horrible though. I thought I hated Lilith before. . . So I just wanted to point it out that first: this was good, well, the writing was, and second, whoa. I hate this. I was so sad. I don't even know how I kept reading.

kassidy62 June 21 2012, 01:00:42 UTC

oh wow, the story really affected you and not really in a good way. My thought on it was that Lilith being a demon, and not only a demon but the first one, special in Lucifer's eyes, meant that she had to be truly black-hearted and evil, and I hoped to write her in a horrific way and in a way that the show hadn't really brought home to me.
Thank you for telling me you liked the writing:)

cherry916 July 22 2012, 10:49:26 UTC

Congratulations! You've been rec'd at spn_littlebro

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