Velcro (Thirteen/Thirteen)

Oct 14, 2011 01:27

Title: Velcro (Or, A Million and One Different Ways to Start Piecing Together Broken Hearts (Part Thirteen/Thirteen ( Read more... )

author: pulpobsessed

Leave a comment

Comments 12

anonymous October 14 2011, 06:28:53 UTC
.... I am incredibly heartbroken...but that was beautiful.

Reply


deeniebee October 14 2011, 07:05:31 UTC
My hearts bleeding for Kurt, for his stupidity. And for realizing that he needs to let go because of that stupidity. I'm proud of him as well for doing it.
And Chris, I can't help but wonder if he really deserves Dave either. I'm sympathetic to his pain/fear of being hurt and I know he loves Dave, but I guess I'm still annoyed he had to be talked into coming to the wedding. Like he should have been able to make the decision on his own. But I'm happy he makes Dave happy. He's a pretty neat guy and like everyone else has his share of flaws, but Dave loves him anyways!
Ah Kurt/Rachel friendship I love it =)
And I love your explanation for their attraction/reaction to each other!
I'm going to have to check out Bell X1, cause now you've made me want to hear that song =)

I really heart this whole series. Thank you for posting both chapters together, I don't think I could have stood the suspense if you posted them separately! And joy I find your doing a third, that's awesome cause I'm not ready to let this 'verse go yet =)

Reply


carolina_hope October 14 2011, 08:20:29 UTC
I did not expect this ending but when you said there will be a third part, it makes sense. I guess they are too messed up individualy and together to work out. they need time

as for Chris, its great that he makes dave happy. and it is clear that he loves Dave. but I feel like he has a very little trust in the relationship. so Im really curious how it will all play out in the future

Reply


stl29tide October 14 2011, 08:36:50 UTC
Hmmm....okay. I'm obvious happy that Cave has prevailed (at least in Velcro). However. You so confuse me. Or I confuse myself, lol.

THIS:

But, anyways, just before my song, I saw Dave and it looked like he was searching for you…but then he saw Chris and I saw something come over his faceOkay. So......at the end of last chapter. By this line above are you trying to say that Dave was thinking about Kurt as being 'the one' and was looking for him since Rachel said it looked like he was, but saw Chris and just....remembered 'oh yeah, I'm supposed to be with Chris. I promised I wouldn't hurt him again, blah, blah, blah'. But then that wouldn't make any sense either because at the end of the last part, he imagined both Kurt and Dave and again, said the choice was clear, walked up to the man he loved and kissed him. And obviously Dave didn't kiss Kurt, so I think I'm reading way too much into this. But then again, you're sneaky with stuff so I kind of usually have to ( ... )

Reply


captain_love October 14 2011, 08:54:17 UTC
That's a beautiful ending, and it's very fulfilling to have Kurt's side of the night before the wedding. You've created a fantastic AU and I love each one of your characters... (Chris <3)

I can't help but shudder a little at the title of your next story... "Blood and tears" Guess I'll have to stock on handkerchiefs before reading it.

Thanks !

Reply


Leave a comment

Up