Sorry for not commenting earlier! Great new installment. I had an inkling that this was what Nick wanted XD I'm a bit disappointed it's so short it would be SO AWESOME if you can write about Nick and Ellis in one of their games or another conning people and being bromantic B) (Which I guess is a bit of a given.) Champagne must flow and surreptitious hands must slip their way up thighs.. um (I'm sure Ellis would dramatically lose a few hands (hurp durp) if Nick did that to him... heck yeah). Haha. See, what I loved about your first part was how you captured the magic of the casino and I'd love for more. There.. there doesn't even need to be any sexy bits if Ellis is getting his charm on at the tables.
Oh, and I adore your Dave/Keith. They are both characterised well; they come across as individuals. (Ellis-flavoured individuals, of course, but still) The "Appleshlipz" bit made me giggle. I wonder what their dastardly plans may be.. perhaps they'll join them for a little riverboat fun?
Sorry sorry sorry. Please disregard my stupid ideas. Please write this how you like, and take your time. I'm enjoying it.
Oh, and I adore your Dave/Keith. They are both characterised well; they come across as individuals. (Ellis-flavoured individuals, of course, but still) The "Appleshlipz" bit made me giggle. I wonder what their dastardly plans may be.. perhaps they'll join them for a little riverboat fun?
Sorry sorry sorry. Please disregard my stupid ideas. Please write this how you like, and take your time. I'm enjoying it.
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