"Rescue Me" Torchwood fic-Jack/Gwen Drabble Rated-G

[karaokegal]

Title: Rescue Me
Fandom: Torchwood
Pairing: Jack/Gwen
Rating: G
Wordcount: 100
Notes: Written for consci_fan_mo from visual prompt:

Comments

[the_summoning_d]

Aw. Sweet, in a sad sort of way

[karaokegal]

Thanks! I hope the whole J/G slightly sweet thing hasn't put everyone off their feed. I see that kind of longing when he looks at her.

I appreciate you reading and commenting.

[donutsweeper]

Oooh, I can totally see Jack thinking that. Not admitting to it, of course, but thinking it all the same.

[karaokegal]

Thanks sweetie. I know some people loathe the idea, but I do see him wanting to be that person for her.

[topgeargirl2]

Really good.

not a fan of Gwen/Jack though but still good.

[karaokegal]

Thanks, sweetie! I felt it was time to fly the bi-fictional banner.

[larielromeniel]

I like this!

Curious...do you know what the picture is?

hello!

[mad_jaks]

mod of consci_fan_mo here - the picture is one someone took themselves, and she didn't actually say. But I'm thinking ruined church/abbey rather than actual 'castle'

[karaokegal]

Thanks, sweetie. I wanted to let Omni-Jack play a little, although whenever I do that he tends to go a little mushy on me.

See mod note re: picture. (It looked like a castle to me. What do I know?)

[mad_jaks]

Noooooo *g*

beta moment - unnecessary 'was' "he was had believed"

You know, I don't think she's quite that strong yet but even I can concede she might well be one day, so I'm choosing to swap your slash for comma ;-)

[karaokegal]

Always happy to take a beta note, but in this case I disagree. "The boy he was" is the one who had believed in the stories.

I won't argue the slash v comma point, but I think denying the love is as futile as denying the J/I fucking, and even I don't try to do that.

Thanks for giving it a go inspite of personal pairing squick.

*HUGS*

[mad_jaks]

You know me, I think he loves her just not to the point where they are shagging. :D
And I'm a firm believer in "Greater love hath no man..." and on that level I'm sure Gwen will definitely be capable of doing that for Jack, one day, like he has for them, so it all held very true.

And my beta moment - I simply misread that, sorry.

[karaokegal]

No worries!

I do appreciate you keeping your Beta Davis Eyes out for me, especially when I'm cranking out drabbles without getting a second opinion before posting.