MMOM Day 14 "Pillow Talk" CSI-NY Don Flack/Danny Messer NC17

[karaokegal]

Title: Pillow Talk
Fandom: CSI-NY
Pairing: Don Flack/Danny Messer (Mentions of Mac, Lindsay, Peyton)
Rating: NC17
Wordcount: 810
Notes: Dialogue only fic. PWP, with OMG!SCHMOOP and almost no canon whatsoever. Clearly mmom is melting my brain. Very vague spoiler for Personal Foul. Pairing/Prompt suggested by gin200168. Thanks to michelleann68 for the look-over but typos and

Comments

[_tallian_]

I'm grinning like a madwoman right now. That was hot and hysterical and *of course* Mac would cut loose like a sex fiend.

Whoo boy. Hotness.

[karaokegal]

Thanks for the comment. Mac is just soooo damn buttoned up, you know he's got a world of kink waiting to happen.

[babykid528]

Mmmhmm! That is one hot pairing right there! :-) Part of the reason I like CSI:NY so much (even though I've missed like a season and a half of it... I'm so far behind) is because I literally pair everyone with everyone else! lol! All combinations of Mac/Danny/Flack make me happy and I love Aiden/Danny and Stella/Flack and I even like Lindsay getting mixed in there every so often... they just all look nice together!
I know you love the Mac/Danny (I still manage to ship them as my OTP even though I like everyone to trade) but, of course, you did an excellent job with the Danny/Flack here! I loved how you got Mac involved too. Awesome job. This was a wonderful bit of smut to cap off my night! ;-)

[karaokegal]

Thanks sweetie. CSI-NY does provide many possible combinations of pretty people, although my angst-smut OTP is still Mac/Danny. I just took this prompt and ran with it in a different direction.

Glad I was able to provide beddy-bye smut.

[gin200168]

OMG that's FAB. Danny is such a dirty, dirty boy, and has a nonstop mouth. And he'd totally use it to get himself and his current... bed partner.. off. ;-)

And the idea of Mac/Danny/Flack is rather hot. (Honestly, put 3 pretty boys together, how could it not be? Even better if you toss in Stella. hehehe)

The bed's big enough... why not? ;-) (actually, considering their behavior as of late, I'm thinking Mac/Flack might be having some rough flings on the side, and Flack got all jealous because Danny wasn't paying him enough attention.)

[karaokegal]

Thanks for the prompt. I'm glad you liked. It definitely veered a little to the schmoopy side for me, but that's where the muse seemed to want to go.

The dynamic between those three definitely has a world of kink to explore.

[iscaris]

“No, it’s not. That’s what guys do. They go to the game. They get drunk. Sometimes they run into dead bodies.”

“And then they go home fuck each other into next Tuesday?”

LOL! Favorite line from this fic. Love how Flack is trying to get some sleep and Danny manages to derail that plan. And Mac swallowing is priceless. I don't think Flack's going to be able to look Mac in the eye for a few days. :D

This was great. Your Danny and Flack were both spot on -- you have no idea how hard it is to find fic in this fandom that actually has our boys sounding like our boys. The dialogue-only style worked really well too.

[karaokegal]

SQueeeeeeee!!!!

Very glad to get a nice comment from you, as I admire so much of your writing.

mmom is a long month, so I need to find different styles and approaches or it all starts blending into each other.

[lexxiescott]

Very hot and you have them both down to a tee. Brilliant.
And bonus for the Joe Friday reference. He's my fav of all time.

[karaokegal]

Thank you so much. This was fun to write. I could hear the voices very clearly, but it was a challenge to differentiate them, since they're both so New York.

Glad you liked.