MMOM Day 7-"First Contact" Torchwood Jack/Emily/Alice Rated - R Wordcount-1250

May 07, 2008 13:31

Title: First Contact
Fandom: Torchwood
Characters: Jack Harkness/Alice Guppy/Emily Holyroyd
Rating: R
Wordcount:1250
Notes: Spoileriffic for Fragments in case you're not there yet. Thanks to beta_goddess for pushing me until this passed the Squirm Test (TM).
Summary: Jack learns what it really means to be a member of Torchwood

First Torchwood fic of the Merry Month, but definitely not the last. )

mmom, torchwood, mmom 2008, fanfic, jack harkness

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spiderine May 7 2008, 20:55:00 UTC
He tried to remember his training in resisting sexual advances. He’d failed that class five times in a row.

I love you. :D

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karaokegal May 8 2008, 16:27:24 UTC
*blushes*

Thanks for the comment. I am proud of that line.

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elinor_godwin May 7 2008, 21:18:38 UTC
Another brilliant story! That was hot. :) And it's part of my canon, now. I'm so happy you wrote this. I'd love to see more stories with these three. Actually, I want them to cancel TW and do TW:1899 with Jack and Alice and Emily. I like Jack better back then. Really moody. Sigh... anyhow. This was fab! Adding it to memories. You rock!

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elinor_godwin May 7 2008, 21:21:13 UTC
Forgot to mention that the line spiderine referred to made me LOL. And this one:

“Doctor,” he called out, because at the end, it was always about the Doctor. Loved it!

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karaokegal May 8 2008, 16:26:29 UTC
I love your Icon. Alice & Emily RULE!

I'm glad I caught a moody feeling. I think his back-story in Fragments (aside from Jossing about a million other fics) had a lot of darkness nd sadness.

I would certainly love to see more of TW 1899, because we know he did manage to adapt.

And thanks for pointing out lines you like. I'm all about the lines, so it's good to know which ones work for you.

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maxx02 May 7 2008, 21:22:07 UTC
Jack has limits!!!?? I'm shocked. Just shocked. I'm going to go sit in the corner and suck my thumb while I consider what they might possibly be... :D

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karaokegal May 7 2008, 21:36:13 UTC
His limits are not what, just who. In A Day In The Death, he said something about how the old guy was good-looking when he was younger, but now Jack wouldn't do him, and I think in this case, Alice and Emily haven't exactly endeared themselves.

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maxx02 May 7 2008, 21:39:01 UTC
lol! You sure know how to suck all of the fun out of the room.;)

I'd come up with some seriously entertaining ideas of what Jack might not be willing to do and I was going through them prioritizing.

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karaokegal May 7 2008, 21:40:19 UTC
Sorry 'bout that, Chief. Forget I said anything and carry one. I'll be interested to see your findings.

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kijikun May 7 2008, 23:13:54 UTC
Bloody brilliant as always.

He could still see her face, imagine her passion, imagine how good it would feel when he did fuck her, fucked both of them, went through every good-looking man and woman Torchwood had to offer.

This is so the Jack we see Series 1 of Torchwood.

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karaokegal May 8 2008, 16:20:05 UTC
Aw shucks!

I'm glad this felt in character to the Jack we see in Season 1. It hasn't all been fun and games, although the next Jack!wank will be one of his better memories.

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gypsylady May 8 2008, 01:22:25 UTC
You've made me happy, so very, very happy.

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karaokegal May 8 2008, 16:18:26 UTC
And your comment did the same for me. So glad you liked it. :)

Love your icon.

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