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"Lady Willpower" Torchwood Drabble Jack Harkness/Sarah Jane Smith Rating-G

Oct 09, 2011 22:07

Title: Lady Willpower
Fandom: Torchwood/Doctor Who
Pairing: Jack/Sarah Jane
Rating: G
Wordcount: 100
Notes: Drabble-a-Day 2011. Day 282. Prompt from tw100. Challenge #214-The Sarah Jane Adventures. Episode: The Temptation of Sarah Jane. Beta by hllangel. Comments and concrit welcome.
Summary: Just how good is Sarah Jane Smith?

( I know you want to see me but you're afraid )

sarah jane smith, doctor who, drabble-a-day 2011, torchwood, tw100, jack harkness, drabble

Comments 16

damigella_314 October 10 2011, 05:55:21 UTC

Wow. Rejecting Captain Harkness' offer to search him thoroughly. A tough lady indeed. Sure enough that I couldn't do that, no matter if he had several containers of atomic weapons parked round the corner ;).

I've now been searching play.com for Torchwood DVD and wondering :).

karaokegal October 26 2011, 20:47:31 UTC

Well, Sarah Jane is a very tough cookie, and she's traveled with or met most of the Doctors since the Third Doctor. Don't forget, Jack has plenty of time to keep trying, and very few besides the Doctor have been able to say 'no' to Jack indefinitely.

proseac1 October 10 2011, 16:07:00 UTC

Nice little vignette, and very tightly written.

I almost know these characters, even though I've never seen the show. Well done!

karaokegal October 26 2011, 20:48:20 UTC

Thanks! You'd love Sarah Jane, she was an amazing character, played by the recently departed Lis Sladen.

rustydog October 11 2011, 03:14:00 UTC

Aaaaah. SO MUCH LOVE.

“Hello, Captain Harkness. And good-bye. I already told you…”

That sounds SO like her. Very principled, quite the willpower (not saying she couldn't have slipped up once or twice...)

And great last line, of course. :)

karaokegal October 26 2011, 20:49:17 UTC

Oh, it's already my fanon (from other drabbles) that she gives in eventually, but damn she makes him work for it.

I'm glad I was able to capture her voice.

unfeathered October 11 2011, 07:06:36 UTC

Hee! This is just so very much them! Lovely! :-)

(P.S. You've got missing speech tags on the end of Jack's second speech)

karaokegal October 26 2011, 20:50:16 UTC

Thanks for the catch! Fixed. I have to believe they get together eventually. The idea of them is just to pretty to give up on.

aeron_lanart October 11 2011, 13:01:40 UTC

Love that last line. So very Sarah Jane - and very Jack too.

karaokegal October 26 2011, 20:50:44 UTC

Thanks! I wasn't 100% sure about the last line, but it seemed to fit.