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"Regrets" NCIS drabble Eli David Rating-G

Mar 21, 2011 00:10

Title: Regrets
Fandom: NCIS
Character: Eli David (mentions of others)
Rating: G
Wordcount: 100
Notes: Drabble-a-Day 2011 Day 79. Prompt from ncisdrabble100: Challenge #230-Wish. Unbeta'd and posted after midnight. Comments and concrit welcome.
Summary: It's not his wish, but it is his fate.

( Too late for a clever cut-line )

drabble-a-day 2011, ncis, fanfic, drabble, ncisdrabble100

Comments 6

donutsweeper March 21 2011, 13:31:57 UTC

oh GAH, wow. Painful in all the right ways

karaokegal March 21 2011, 16:20:51 UTC

Thank you! I feel like Eli is one of those characters who canon demonizes, but I can't bring myself to hate.

ami_ven March 22 2011, 00:55:44 UTC

Very, very nice!

karaokegal March 22 2011, 01:22:06 UTC

Thanks! I was struggling with the prompt, and then I thought of Eli and it all came together.

alidiabin March 22 2011, 03:03:05 UTC

Wow, so much with so little words. I love Eli, so i'm glad you wrote about him. And the implication that his death is comming and maybe even self-inflicted with the last line... just wow. Well done.

karaokegal March 22 2011, 04:18:28 UTC

Thank you! I love Eli, especially because I'm so clearly supposed to hate him and think that Gibbs is a superior father figure, which I totally don't! Glad you liked the drabble.