Final Fantasy VII: O Brother (Rufus, Lazard)

[karanguni]

Hi universe, am still alive and badly needing a) a break and b) the ability to either c) purchase the world or d) destroy it with my finger; on so few hours of sleep it's ridiculous, and body refuses to let me sleep even when I'm tired, so here, have incoherent Final Fantasy VII fic, written in a fit of experimentation (again). It's incoherent even

Comments

[dnatio_memoriae]

*dies an ecstatic death

[karanguni]

Whooooooo, I don't like the style either, because it's what my head sounds like when I'm on too little sleep - something like this, in order to be really effective, needs 2840928409 backstory and a lot more padding, but here I am lazy and out comes just a thousand words of exhaustion-induced wordy hysteria! :D :D

\o Lazard 101:

Lazard: Hi my name is Lazard DEUSERICUS AND I TOTALLY DO NOT LOOK LIKE A SHINRA.
Lazard: I'm director of SOLDIER and I send my men lots of messages about bonds that go deeper than blood.
Rufus: *GETS PROMOTED*
Lazard: Totally not bitter, nope.
Lazard: *sacrifices self for his SOLDIERs*

Re: repartee, I think it's beyond people because IT'S BEYOND ME TOO; THEY ALL JUST TALK RUBBISH. WHOO. \o \o \o

[intradependency]

&hearts Evocative.

I feel for Lazard, strangely enough.

[karanguni]

♥ I'm boring that way. \o

Lazard is a sad bastard, and one day I will write Cain-and-Abel fic for him.

[enthroned]

Oh oh oh my god. You are /amazing/!

The tone of this is...I don't know. Intense and captivating. Beautifully done Rufus (which I don't often say lol). The interaction with Lazard here is exactly how I imagine it but never see it done.

Also, the reference to Tseng at the end...a;dlsj ♥♥♥

[karanguni]

Eeee, thank you! ♥ I am terrible at sneaking in Tseng-references. 8D

[marchwarden23]

So very well done. I absolutely adore the Lazard/Rufus dialogue...such brothers. They just need to do each other and get it over with. XD Different enough to hate each other, similar enough to really hate each other.

[karanguni]

*g* Reaaaaaaally hate. :D :D :D

[subcon_ruler]

YAY. I've been scouring the net for anything involving Rufus and Lazard ANYTHING, and I'm happy to have found this. I love their exchanges and the dreamlike hallucinatory feeling, especially with the "could say, could've said," sort of thing... so interestingly done. GODS I LOVE RUFUS AND LAZARD. AKDJFLASJFLSK. *done* ^^;

[karanguni]

:DDD Thank you! Hehe, they make a pretty interesting pair of brothers to write, don't they? 8D

[subcon_ruler]

They do. Except I'm naughty and I slash them. *wicked grin*