:sigh:: they really should have done more with Gaeta and Zarek. This was just awesome, but you know how much I ADORE this section. (Also, I really like the argument about Hoshi)
I understand why Gaeta and Zarek gave you so much trouble - they so obviously wanted to frak like bunnies when you needed them to have serious revolution starting discussion.
I really like how you track the last two seasons through Felix's johns and what they're dealing with at the time.
Heh, yeah, Hoshi is still my favorite partner for Felix, but Zarek insinuated himself into being a very compelling (and oddly hot?) runner-up. ;)
Tell me there's a director's cut of that Gaeta/Zarek sex scene ;)
There's a reason I don't go into detail in sex scenes: I'm just not any good at making them compelling once they get into much more detail than what they've got here. But hey, there's always remix... ;)
Gaeta/Zarek is usually a pairing that makes me go running far far away, but I like it here. I also like this chapter because you can see the hope just draining out of everyone. Daphne giving up when she doesn't know what she's saving for anymore- ouch.
Thanks for sticking with a fic with so many bizarre/"run away! run away!" pairings! And "hope just draining out of everyone" is an excellent descriptor for post-Earth, pre-mutiny Fleet. It was fun to play that despair from the civilian perspective.
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I really like how you track the last two seasons through Felix's johns and what they're dealing with at the time.
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Tell me there's a director's cut of that Gaeta/Zarek sex scene ;)
There's a reason I don't go into detail in sex scenes: I'm just not any good at making them compelling once they get into much more detail than what they've got here. But hey, there's always remix... ;)
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