036. You sold me - Hankyung/Siwon
100 fic challenge [#036.] Bathroom Tiles, Hankyung/Siwon
Title: You sold me
Length: 2,399 words
Author: shieldkitten
Rating: R (inexplicit sex, dark themes, character death)
Summary: Oldthink, crimethink, sexcrime.
Author's Note: Based on the novel 1984 by George Orwell.
( They commit treachery, quietly, lips pressed together )
Title: You sold me
Length: 2,399 words
Author: shieldkitten
Rating: R (inexplicit sex, dark themes, character death)
Summary: Oldthink, crimethink, sexcrime.
Author's Note: Based on the novel 1984 by George Orwell.
( They commit treachery, quietly, lips pressed together )
Your use of the prompt was clever--it always seems to me that it'd be difficult to write such a drawn-out fic based entirely on the two of them in a bathroom, so this was a good workaround.
I want to quote individual lines that I love best, but I'm not sure if there's a cap on the length of comments, so I'll stick with two:
They commit treachery, quietly, lips pressed together, and every kiss is a felony, every touch, an offence, and together they commit an act of transgression far worse than any that Hankyung has ever done.
I'm not sure which is the bigger felony here--the sex or the feeling behind it. And I love that.
"There is no hope for this one," someone else says, someone standing behind his chair outside his field of vision, and Hankyung agrees that there is no hope, not for Siwon whose eyes have lost the fierce glow that they once had.
They shoot him in a courtyard, with the sunlight warm on his back.
I was just saying to a friend last night that I didn't read Super Junior deathfic. And this hurt, but...it had to, I suppose, so it's heartwrenching in a necessary kind of way.
(Also--the Yewook and the not singing and just augh, my heart place again.)
Short version: I loved this, and thank you for sharing it!
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I... write too much Super Junior deathfic. -.-''
Thank you for reading it!
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