Coming Home (After the Flaw: Oligarchy, Chapter 33)

[kanedax]

Title: Coming Home (After the Flaw: Oligarchy, Chapter 33)
Author: kanedax
Spoilers: Previous Chapters
Rating: PG13 for language and situations
Summary: Luna goes home
Notes: I own these characters. The others belong to JK Rowling.

Comments

[cactus_wren]

Oh dear. HC and Victoire together ought to be *really* interesting. Although I'm sure they're both mature enough to get past it and work together to help everyone, it's still going to be rather unpleasant.
For a second there, I was all 'Yay, she fixed Luna! Now go fix Charlie!' and then *poof*, it didn't last. I hope there is some way to undo the memory charm before this fic is over! And poor Ginny, she just cannot be paralyzed forever. I forbid it!

[father_turtle]

You haven't lost the knack for keeping me hanging on. Still want to kick your head, but in a good way.

[kanedax]

Well, if it helps any, I don't plan on keeping people on the hook QUITE as long as I did before. Fewer new subplots means no more filler chapters means faster resolution.

[mollywheezy]

I'm sorry Luna isn't completely fixed but yay for progress! I loved your originality here: Luna's hiding the research in Neville's portrait, and telling her mother's photograph was especially brilliant. LOL at Neville's catching Victoire kissing Luna. And great ending--the next chapter should be very interesting . . . ;)

[madderbrad]

Great chapter. The notion of Victoire 'pulling' the most recent 'instance' of Luna out into the real world was excellent. As was the fact that the memory spell was still at work, and would end up dragging her back in.

You don't believe in making things easy, do you?

Talking of not making things easy ... HC versus Victoire!! I so much want to see Victoire with a black eye or two. Although, yeah, you're going to make them all grown up, put their personal feelings in the background (for now), aren't you? Phooey.

Wondering if this almost-sudden telepathic power of Victoire makes her THE NEXT (was that the term?). I think you'll need to explain it somewhere along the line.

[lorelei_lynn]

Wow, I finally caught up. This story has been quite a roller-coaster ride and it's still not done. Fantastic all around!

[kanedax]

heh congrats! more to come soon!