Standing Offers (After the Flaw: Oligarchy, Chapter 27)

[kanedax]

Title: Standing Offers (After the Flaw: Oligarchy, Chapter 27)
Author: kanedax
Spoilers: Previous Chapters
Rating: PG13 for language
Summary: Hermione's first day as Minister could be going better.
Notes: I own these characters, but the others belong to JK Rowling.

Comments

[father_turtle]

DUDE!

You know, as I writer, I've been thinking about what you've been doing with this story and about this story in comparison to ATF1. ATF1 was just a fill-in-the-blanks kind of story to get us from ATF to the Epilogue. ATF2 is actually an original story, albeit with the borrowed universe and some borrowed characters. And I'm impressed on where you've taken this. I'd love to see you work with original material someday.

[mollywheezy]

Wow. That was absolutely heart-wrenching. I really feel for all of the Weasleys. Poor Hermione! Sad and worried about her loved ones, with the weight of the country on her, too. Excellent job portraying the grief and confusion of the situation, especially with how it affects them personally.

[charma_10]

Jesus fucking Christ.

this is better than Transformers.

[madderbrad]

I was worried that something like Cairo would happen; that some of the 'good guys', the Ministries, would turn. Oh dear.

Hopefully Hermione's been jostled into getting into 'action mode' by her two boys -

"We're going to find whoever did this and make them pay."

She should get on the wireless and make a broadcast, impose a draft, make a call to arms. Except ... they don't know who to fight yet, the Oligarchy are still unknowns. And if the Prime Minister is really going to start a war against ALL the magical world ... who knows what can happen in this story?!

Next chapter please!! :-)