Eleven Winter Days (After the Flaw: Oligarchy, Chapter 22)

[kanedax]

Title: Eleven Winter Days (After the Flaw: Oligarchy, Chapter 22)
Author: kanedax
Spoilers: Previous Chapters
Rating: NC17 for language and sexual content
Summary: What gifts did you get over the holidays?
Notes: *prepares for fan onslaught*
If you haven't already, please take my reader's poll regarding my posting schedule.
I own these characters.

Comments

[loonie]

*gasp* you turned teddy lupin into an adulterer! i don't know how i feel about that...
i'm very interested to see where this Next business is going and how/if Victoire and Meghan play a role. I've lost track, how many more chapters in this chunk?

[kanedax]

Three more to come... Plus right now I'm leaning towards posting as I go for a while, so you won't have to wait as long for chapters 26+...

[kanedax]

hmmmm... the only problem about taking odds on who The Next is is that if too many people figure it out I might change my mind. ;)

[madderbrad]

Damn, damn, damn.

I'm a big-time fan of man's intellect ruling his emotions ... restraining the bad emotions at least. Of proper relationships being so much more than physical attraction/lust. That's a secondary reason for why I dislike Rowling's canon OBHWF relationships (although not one of the primary ones). I was really hoping that Teddy would be faithful to HC, even while he works things out. Damn.

You did it well; I was quite startled when I came upon that scene. HC's pondering about Ted's slightly off responses at the Burrow had me concerned, but I thought Ted was just worried about his being (only) 'mentally unfaithful' to his wife. Only to come upon that scene later. Damn.

I thought there was a chance that the Oligarchy were good guys - well, anti-heroic good guys, given that they've killed - set up to combat a menace to all mankind, I dunno. But this "The few shall rule the many" thing puts paid to that

[kanedax]

Because you want to see how it ends, just like the rest of us. ;)

[mikimousey]

I teared up a couple time the past few chapters. What happened with Charlie, Luna and Vic are just too sad. Good thing we have little Scorpious and Meghan to balance it out a little bit :)

[mollywheezy]

BAD TEDDY! BAD VICTOIRE! *grumbles* >:(

POOR HC!!

I'm glad we have the sweet fluffiness of Meghan and Scorpius to balance out all the angst. They are adorable. :)

Luna's journal is heartwrenching and very well-done. I really want her and Charlie both to get well and get together officially. I'm thinking Luna may be the one as well to give clues to the aurors through her lucid moments. Keeping reading . . .