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Dream Interpretations (After the Flaw: Oligarchy, Chapter 21)

Jun 10, 2009 11:47

Title: Dream Interpretations (After the Flaw: Oligarchy, Chapter 21)
Author: kanedax
Spoilers: Previous Chapters
Rating: PG13 for language and sexual situations
Summary: You'd think a Diviner would be able to tell you what to do.
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Comments 7

cactus_wren June 10 2009, 18:06:04 UTC

Poor Teddy. That whole meeting didn't really end up helping him at all, did it?

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kanedax June 10 2009, 21:17:55 UTC

Twenty years and a werewolf attack can do a lot to a girl, apparently. ;)

madderbrad June 11 2009, 03:45:13 UTC

I'm impressed with mature!Lavender.

I refuse to believe that Teddy/HC is doomed!!!

kanedax June 11 2009, 04:12:49 UTC

Well, like the Joker would say, "it's all part of the plan."

Actually, no. It's more like, as the Joker would say, "Do I really look like a guy with a plan? You know what I am? I'm a dog chasing cars. I wouldn't know what to do with one if I caught it."

I'm honestly not planning this thing anymore. It's writing itself, I'm re-working chapter outlines with every subsequent sitting. It's scary, really. Sometimes I'm afraid to sit down and keep writing cuz I don't know what's going to happen next.

So I make no promises one way or the other.

madderbrad June 11 2009, 04:43:54 UTC

I'm honestly not planning this thing anymore.

Really? Are you sure?

Because ... if that's true ...

LOBBYING MAY BE EFFECTIVE!!!

Give me your e-mail address and I'll flood it with messages - "Best friends make the best lovers" - "Teddy/HC 4 evah!" - and so forth. Assertion therapy and positive reinforcement that is sure to influence your muse. It'll help remove that fear you mention, too; I'm just trying to be helpful! :-)

kanedax June 11 2009, 15:38:03 UTC

Well, I wouldn't say I'm NOT planning it. But I would say that the plans keep getting tossed out the window with each subsequent chapter.

No lobbying, though, since, you know, those'll probably get tossed out the window, too. ;)

mollywheezy June 18 2009, 01:28:34 UTC

Poor Victoire and Teddy! I'm surprised one of them didn't spontaneously combust from embarrassment in this chapter! I really liked Lavender--she was almost like a counselor instead of divination nut. Good job making her a mature character.

How about you find Victoire a man besides Teddy, so she can let go of Teddy once and for all and just be his friend, and Teddy and HC can live happily ever after as a married couple? There's my lobby. ;)