Watch Me (After the Flaw: Oligarchy, Chapter 19)

[kanedax]

Title: Watch Me (After the Flaw, Oligarchy: Chapter 19)
Author: kanedax
Spoilers: Previous Chapters
Rating: R for language and sexual content
Summary: Series three brings many surprises
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I own these characters. The others belong to JK Rowling.

Comments

[loonie]

ooh. they're sharing dreams... can't wait to find out what it means.

[cactus_wren]

Oh boy, this is going to cause all kinds of problems, hope Teddy and HC's marriage survives.

[madderbrad]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

After all that emotion ... all the angst ... all the thought waves I aimed your way when you were finishing up After the Flaw ... I *refuse* to believe that you're going to throw away Ted/HC at this point. Don't you dare, mister!!!

A big ... well, not a *surprise*, because Victoire was suspecting it a couple of chapters ago ... problem and plot point revealed here. You've got me wondering if Victoire and Ted are destined to mate and produce 'The Next' or something.

[mollywheezy]

You did an excellent job capturing Ted's and Victoire's awkwardness and confusing emotions. That would be so difficult for both of them, and you showed the conflict very well.

I hope Ted does NOT commit adultery. I think he'll resist temptation. He'd better . . .

I don't like that Ted is not telling HC about the dreams. It's one thing when he thought this was just random brain crud and not worth bringing up--he's right that you can't control your mind when you sleep. But now that he knows these dreams are something far more serious and possibly sinister, I don't think he should be hiding something that important from his wife. Of course, I totally understand Ted's and Vic's not wanting to tell ANYONE ELSE about these dreams. ;)

Good for Vic for having the courage to ask Ted--that was a huge risk if he wasn't having the dreams, especially. Go Gryffindor!

Obviously, I am really enjoying your story if I am this involved in what I want or do not want to happen. ;) Great writing!

[mickawber]

"Watch me" indeed! Whew!

I don't know who I feel worst for here: Vic, Teddy, or HC.

Luna, I think. And Charlie. :sigh: