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Fourteen (After the Flaw: Oligarchy, Chapter 13)

Mar 27, 2009 10:33

Title: Fourteen (After the Flaw: Oligarchy, Chapter 13)
Author: kanedax
Spoilers: Previous Chapters
Rating: R for language
Summary: Scorpius gets a few birthday surprises
Notes: Confusing title much?
I own these characters. The others belong to JK Rowling.

( Fourteen (After the Flaw: Oligarchy, Chapter 13) )

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Comments 3

madderbrad March 31 2009, 03:13:39 UTC

Hee, the more Meghan I see the happier I think I'm going to be with this story.

I do hope Scorpius thinks to use her super-duper power for his side. Creating wards and charms that the purebloods can't get through for example. Well, maybe too obvious for you, but it's fun to think about.

"two mermen staring back at him" - yoiks. No privacy in the Slytherin dormitory!!

mikimousey May 23 2009, 05:10:23 UTC

I love it! More Meghan and scorpius please!

mollywheezy June 3 2009, 21:58:10 UTC

Poor Scorpius! :(

The descriptions of the reasons for the gifts from his family were very funny in a sad sort of way--sad that his family doesn't bother to get to know him.

I love that Meghan bought his a gift! Squee! for another step forward in their friendship. :)

I also loved the mermen looking at him. lol I knew the Slytherins were under the lake, but never thought of that possibility before. ;)

And calling chapter 13 "Fourteen" LOL