Title: After the Flaw: Finale Author: kanedax Spoilers: Deathly Hallows, Previous Chapters (READ PART V FIRST) ( timeline) Rating: PG-13 for language and suggestive content Summary: Doesn’t Finale summarize it enough? ( After the Flaw: Finale )
I just want to say how amazing your story is and has been over the past six months. I tuned in around Eleven Months Later, and have been hooked ever since. And I must tell you that I'm typically a lurker and never ever review/comment on anything. So me actually having commented on your stories over the past few months has to say something. This has been a great story, with very thoughtful character development, a great plot, and just enough steaminess. Everything that you've put the characters through in these 19 years has been believable and I almost forget that it didn't actually happen in canon.
I hope you write more with these characters. I'm going to miss finding a new chapter posted on my friend's list every so often. I'm not a huge T/HC shipper, but I think you ended the series beautifully, With an amazing proposal that I can only hope that my boyfriend can rival.
Ah, that was good. Like the very first ones. I'm glad I stuck around for the finale. Don't hate me if I point out that "ass" there should be "arse." Otherwise, I think it's perfect.
I love this ending. And Hermione's speech. And Teddy being the date. Lovely, all of it.
Kinda felt like a full-circle situation in a lot of ways. The more I wrote this chapter the more I could slip in little nods to previous chapters. It were neat.
lol it's tough to buy or not buy the canon version of the characters, since we really don't know them at all. Which made it a LOT more fun to play around with them in the end.
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(plus i get to be the first to comment... and my very first comment at that) ;)
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I hope you write more with these characters. I'm going to miss finding a new chapter posted on my friend's list every so often. I'm not a huge T/HC shipper, but I think you ended the series beautifully, With an amazing proposal that I can only hope that my boyfriend can rival.
Well done. :)
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I love this ending. And Hermione's speech. And Teddy being the date. Lovely, all of it.
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Thanks for reading!
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And I didn't know you were still reading. Woo! ;)
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