Eleven and a Half Years Later: Unprecedented

[kanedax]

Title: Eleven and a Half Years Later: Unprecedented
Author: kanedax
Spoilers: Deathly Hallows & Previous Chapters
Characters/Pairings: Neville/Uriela (OC), Tiberius Ogden, various portraits
Rating: R for language, nudity, and sexual activity and discussion
Word count: 4,307 words
Summary: The headmaster gets his say
Notes: I own Uriela Clavis and these

Comments

[loonie]

awww, neville's getting married! i love how you brought parvati's desire to teach back into the story. with each progressing chapter, it amazes me the detail that you put in and how it connects with prior chapters (even if not subsequent). great job, again. :)

[kanedax]

As soon as I wrote that Parvati wanted to teach, I realized "Oh, shit, this is a BAD idea." If she had been working at Hogwarts during NYL, there's no way that Ginny wouldn't have said "Give Neville our love" without saying "Give Neville and Parvati our love."

But Beauxbatons seemed like a nice way out. It does seem like a much more professional school than Hogwarts, so someone from the business community would be a much better fit.

[anonymous]

Love the chapter. Just one tiny nitpick: At the very beginning, "shined" should be "shone." It's an irregular verb that seems to have left the public consciousness. I spot it everywhere these days.

[kanedax]

fixed. I was weighing between the two of them when I wrote that sentence, but in the end I guess I chose the wrong one.

[bibliophile20]

That has to be my favorite line as well. Excellent chapter, Kanedex. (BTW, is it homage or plagiarism if I steal that line for my own fic?)

[kanedax]

Ummmmm... ignorance? lol I didn't know you had that line in your fic.

[bibliophile20]

I don't have that line in there yet, so I'm asking, for when I do find a convenient point to stick it in, if it's considered plagiarism or homage.

[samanthacr]

“Longbottom, stop arguing with the acrylics,” Ogden sighed.

Too funny!! Now that I think about it, I was wondering, "Acrylics or Oils?" Just teasing.

Keep it up!!

--scr

[kanedax]

Probably oils, but, um... acrylics sounds funnier...

[charma_10]

Awww! Loved the conversations with the acrylics!

And Neville, and Uriela!

I want them to have babies though!! No permanent contraceptive charms!!!

[kanedax]

lol might happen. might not. time will tell.