Five and a Half Years Later: One Cold Night In February (2/2)

[kanedax]

Title: Five and a Half Years Later: One Cold Night In February (2/2)
Author: kanedax
Spoilers: Deathly Hallows & Previous Chapters
Characters: H/G, R/Hr, N/L, and many others
Rating: Hard R for language, nudity, and sex
Summary: Neville and Luna get interrupted
Notes: This one was fun to write. The whole world of post-DH Potterverse is growing beneath

Comments

[vikingprincess]

I particularly liked the part with Flitwick. And of course, Luna's inevitable discomfort-causing statements. :)

[kanedax]

Luna always brings the pain. I try to sprinkle them around, I don't want to make them her trademark. So when they hit they are o so effective. ;)

[einstein87]

OH-MY-GOD!

It's 1 am here, and my roommate was complaining about me screaming for joy!

finally, the next generation of Potter. Haha. Oh, and why does the book have to be at the closet?

[kanedax]

To keep it from being tinkered with. ;)

[einstein87]

lol.

speaking about George *see comment below*, will you write about him and Verity? one-shot, maybe?

[kanedax]

Possibly. I actually was planning on expanding a bit on their relationship in the chapter, like how they eloped, but I didn't have time to find an English equivalent to a Vegas Wedding, so I decided to let it sit by for now.

It's definitely something in the cards, though. I haven't even really thought much of Verity beyond "Cute Blonde Girl Who Works For Wheezes." Might be something to consider.

Well Done

[anonymous]

I've been reading since Chapter 1; however, I thought I would comment and tell you just how awesome your writing is. I really enjoyed Flitwick's appearance in this chapter.

Re: Well Done

[kanedax]

Thank you very much! I like when the hidden people start making themselves known.

[cactus_wren]

Omg, Luna is funny as ever, she so innocently drops the most hilarious comments. And George's reactions were great, too.
The bit with Flitwick was wonderful, love the idea of the book marking future students. After reading part one of this story, I can think of one person who could possibly replace him as Charms professor ....

[kanedax]

lol it's something that I could think of, possibly, but I don't know. Doesn't feel like it'd mesh into Nineteen Years Later if they say "Give our love to Neville" but not "Give our love to Luna."

So who knows?

[charma_10]

“Hermione, how many times have we talked about this?” said Ron. “Never ask Luna anything unless you really want to hear the answer.”

*dies*

“Oh, thank God,” said George at the sight of the wand. “Dad, clean me out, I don’t need to remember the last five minutes.”

*snorts*

[kanedax]

I don't get a chance to write George very often, so when I do I try to make it worthwhile.