The Thought That Counts

Aug 12, 2007 21:04


Title: The Thought That Counts
Author: kanedax
Spoilers: Deathly Hallows
Rating: NC17 for language and sex
Summary: It’s someone’s birthday…
Characters/Pairings: Harry/Ginny/Luna (Hey, look!  No spoiler cut!)
Notes: For those of you who are awaiting the next chapter in my After The Flaw series, be aware that THIS IS NOT IT. I was tempted to try to make ( Read more... )

adult, potter, fanfic

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makeroftomorrow August 13 2007, 17:23:36 UTC
I can't believe I'm going to be one of the first people to comment on this! This is great stuff! Kinky, hilarious, and I'm sure there's a whole myriad of other things that you could call it.

I'm quite impressed, Kanedex. It's really a funny work. (I almost feel terrible for laughing at it in certain places. But, I did. So, I have to compliment you on that. It really was funny.) There were a couple of lines that I really did laugh at.

For one, I loved the following.
“You’re no fun,” Ginny pouted, pressing her body against his. “Knocking down all of my excuses to fuck your brains out.”

“We’ve been dating for over four and a half years, we’re engaged, and now we need excuses?” chuckled Harry, his hands sliding along the back of her blouse. “That sounds like a bad sign.”
I so laughed, really hard at that line. I think out of all of them, that's one of my favorites. I knew I always liked Ginny for some reason. Forceful attitude, and she's not afraid to tell you what she wants ( ... )

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kanedax August 13 2007, 17:26:54 UTC
Oh, I know I was skirting the line between hot, creepy, and hilarious.

World Tour's coming. Right now it's looking to be three different chapters. Might be two, depending on how the eventual layout works out. It'll be a few days before I officially start writing, though. Too much planning to get done, too much Wikipedia research on locales.

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makeroftomorrow August 13 2007, 18:02:41 UTC
Well, do the research that you need to do so that you can get it all good and right. Don't want you to rush it all and have continuity errors and what not. Just know that your public, or at the very least me, awaits the writing of Titan Arum with great apprehension! Can't wait to read it!

~Maker Of Tomorrow

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vikingprincess August 14 2007, 00:55:23 UTC
so glad you left me the link. would never have gotten back to it otherwise. hot, sweet. nice how they're all pretty comfy with it. and you can be proud of first porn. :)

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kanedax August 14 2007, 02:02:05 UTC
Thank ya much. Glad you enjoyed. ;)

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kanedax August 15 2007, 20:30:58 UTC
*bouncy bouncy bouncy*

Thanks a lot! I haven't gotten a lot of response to this one yet, mostly because your average HP fic reader tends to prefer manman over, you know, this. Also, I only posted this on one community, vs. three or four others with most of my other work. So it's good to know I'm still bringing in the new. ;)

Read away! New chapter of After The Flaw will probably be up by this weekend, and I'll be continuing to update regularly. I'm assuming you got here through hp_fiction, and that's the only community where I'll be posting EVERY chapter (outside of my personal journal, which you can always friend).

As for new pr0n... who knows. I might have tapped my capacity for creativity and believability within one story. It's not something that'll be happening very often. But thanks again!

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makeroftomorrow August 16 2007, 01:00:20 UTC
To have the pr0n happening a lot can get old after a while. The occasional kinky thing here, or the risky comment there, that's okay. (For Example, Thirteen Months Later, right at the end, where Ginny pulls Harry into the kiss. That's good. Not entirely over the line, but it's still a bit kinky.) Don't be afraid to write it every now and again, though! It's really fun to read your works. *nodnod*

~Maker Of Tomorrow

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mickawber August 16 2007, 21:20:41 UTC
Ah, bless Luna for being so understanding. ;-)

This is a wonderful bit of fun, and captures what I love best about all three characters, about Harry/Ginny and about this threesome, all in one neat little package.

And it is, to the best of my knowledge, the first H/G/L fic written post-DH!

I've posted a link over at the Harry/Ginny/Luna community, flamingnargle-I didn't think you'd mind. And thank you for writing-and sharing this.

:-D

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kanedax August 16 2007, 21:28:32 UTC
I... I honestly didn't know that there WAS a HGL-themed community. Huh. Dude, I'm in. Thanks for the rec.

And thanks for the comment, too. I read your series "Back To The Garden" a few days before DH came out, and absolutely loved it, to the point that I was afraid I was getting spoiled by your interpretation of the Horcruxes, the Deathly Hallows, that kind of thing. Fantastic stuff. Hope you read more!

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mickawber August 16 2007, 21:33:10 UTC
Oh, I'll definitely read more! And I'm embarrassed to say that not only is there an H/G/L comm... but I'm one of the mods. XD

And thanks for the comments on Back to the Garden. I have to say that I was really pleased by the things that I'd gotten right-but more pleased that, though I'd followed her clues more or less correctly, she still managed to take the story off in unexpected directions. Thanks again!

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ap_aelfwine August 16 2007, 22:29:20 UTC
Lovely!

This is quite sweet, and nicely done. Glad to see someone new writing H/G/L, and furthermore so well.

Got here by way of Antosha's post in flamingnargle, FWIW.

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kanedax August 16 2007, 23:42:19 UTC
Thanks! Up until about an hour and a half, two hours ago I didn't even realize there WAS an HGL-related site. But I'm glad he found me, and am glad that he posted there for me.

It's not a pairing I would explore very often, mostly because I'm just not comfortable writing this style of fic (this is actually my first NC17 in any fandom). But they're definitely a fun trio to go with.

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ap_aelfwine August 17 2007, 02:34:48 UTC
Most welcome!

It's not a pairing I would explore very often, mostly because I'm just not comfortable writing this style of fic (this is actually my first NC17 in any fandom).

As you wish, of course, but you don't have to write them NC-17 just because they're a threesome. Some of my own favourites from flamingnargle are quiet domestic stories or WAFFy bits of fluff rated G to PG-13.

Frex, Antosha's Locked Room stories (well, there is _one_ NC-17 chapter in there, but it's skippable. Not that I'd _recommend_ skipping it, mind. ;-), or this drabble from alexandralynch.

But they're definitely a fun trio to go with.

That they are. ;-)

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kanedax August 17 2007, 13:15:10 UTC
I'll take a look. Thanks a lot!

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