Doh!
Just recieved a review from Order of Gryffindor. Apparently I got the army ranks wrong - a big fat DOH! on my part and I wanted to much to be accurate.,,whats worse the person who commented doesn't have an account on ff.net for me to PM them and ask them how to correct my mistakes...no worries I'll avoid rank references in the next chappie and ask them to message me instead..,
*le sigh*
*le sigh*