A piece of Kame for fazlyn_n

[kame_mod]

Title: Colorblind
Pairing/Group: Kame/Ohno
Rating/Warnings: PG-13
Summary: Kame finds out that there are eight steps to his happiness. Each of them equally unique, alluring and beautiful.
Note: Dear fazlyn_n, I was immediately intrigued by your interesting choice of pairings and decided to go for Kame/Ohno. In your sign-up you said that you don’t want any

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[yoru_no_hikaru]

I don't know... don't know how to - or where to start. Well, as you can see, I am not speechless - I'm completely incoherent. ^^" The thing is, I don't think I can write a comment that will do justice to this story. I shall give it my very best, though. :)

First, the general set-up. I really love the idea. The way in which a relationship establishes, with a glimpse at all the important stations along the way. That was really quite touching for me. And I love the images that you chose. All of them are so fit and set a harmoneous air.

One more general statement. I love, love, love your imagery. Everything is just... I can't find the right words, it just gives me the feeling that they fit. In the scene and together. I cannot really put down any better what my actual feeling is. But it's... ♥

Okay, now for the scenes. ^^

First: Omg, I love fhat kind of feeling when spring rouses and it slowly gets warm outside. But really, silly Kame, falling asleep in the sand like that. XD Aw and when Ohno finds him, I think they're both quite taken aback in that moment. Big LOLZ at Kame for getting the "Oh, he's angry... he's hot when he's angry" feeling. Would be a good option for "angry sex". XD

Second: *hoots* 15-year-old teenage Kame for the win!!! \(^o^)/ Aw, he's so cute, being all embarrassed over his crush. ^^" And Ohno, with the light senpai-attitude. I like that kind of interaction so much! ♥♥♥ It must have been tough on Kame, but Ohno made it pretty easy for him. Well, after scolding him first. ^_^

Third: Omg, that was so hilarious. XD The "art" thing... so much THIS!!! I mean, when you like someone you will try to impress the person. What's more, you'll try to show your interest in stuff the other person likes. I can't believe Kame actually learned about paintings and painters. Of course, the plan has to fail, but it's still cute, I think. But really, why do these guys always have to run? ^^" It's pure love how Ohno gets all embarrassed about his idea. He wanted to be alone with Kame. ♥ Sneaky Ohno? :D In the end he snatches his kiss anyway. XD I like his confidence in this. Like, he too is a bit shy about e erything, but more experienced and so he simply goes for it. Yays! ^_^

Fourth: Oh, Kame plays games. Argh, I would kill my boyfriend for such an act. XD Jealousy is such a distressful feeling. ^^" Poor Ohno-kun, I'm feeling with you, honey. XP Oh, but I love the scene that they have together. The feelings Kame has, the intensity and how raw they are. *_____* You give this lust a wonderful taste that I'd like to have as well.

Fifth: For this one, a simple, heart-felt LOL!!! Omg, there are things that just aren't acceptable. Like a xoor that's not closing by itself. @_@ I mean, it's not like Ohno couldn't afford a) A really good apartment and b) a service worker to keep ecerything in good shape. It's just so funny that he totally doesn't mind about any of it. XD It's like "I basically only sleep here. There's a bed, so..." Haha, it's a good thing Kame wants to take care of things.

Sixth: Oh yes, of course. All the litttle things going from "But I don't eat tuna!" all the way to "Yeah... no, I am so not watchi g that topmodel show. Give me the remote control". These things aren't easy to over-come. First you'll be shocked. There are many new things you'll learn sbout your lover and you're not going to like all of them. ^^" You will also have to change certain things.

Seventh: Haha, while Ohno's solution might be a good idea, sometimes there's no way around a fight and feelings will well up and someone will be hurt. It's not nice, but it happens. And in the end, Ohno is really sweet. He comes to take Kame back in. The fight seems still present, but the anger has gone and it feels like they have worked something out - or at least they're going to.

Eighth: Aw, what a sweet little glimpse into their future. I can understand Kame when it feels a bit scary, but he seems complety dedicated to Ohno, so their bond will be stronger than anything else.

Okay, very shortly now, this is a piece of art. You did something totally amazing here. Please write for me in a future exchange, I'd be forever happy. m(__)m Thanks a lot for putting so much work in this. ♥♥♥