Fic: Sufficient Illumination

May 18, 2008 10:24

Title: Sufficient Illumination
Author: kalquessa
Fandom: Stargate: SG-1
Genre: Gen, Humor (sort of), character study
Word Count: 1,242
Characters: Jack, Teal'c
Season/Spoilers: Season 7
Rating: G
Warnings: This is my first attempt at Teal'c POV.

Written for the sg1friendathon. The prompt I chose was "Jack, Teal'c. 'Seriousness is not a virtue' -- G.K. Chesterton." I'm ( Read more... )

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Comments 37

jd3000 June 4 2008, 17:31:36 UTC
Bwahahaha, hilarious!

-JD

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kalquessa June 5 2008, 16:01:12 UTC
Thanks! *grin*

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jaxomsride June 5 2008, 00:17:08 UTC
Great!

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kalquessa June 5 2008, 16:01:26 UTC
Thank you, glad you enjoyed.

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suzannemarie June 5 2008, 01:15:04 UTC
"Y'know, T, I sometimes worry that you've forgotten which one of us is supposed to be the straight-man in this relationship."

Hee! Nice!

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kalquessa June 5 2008, 16:02:56 UTC
That was the one and only line of this whole fic that survived all five or six different attempts to get the fic written. *grin* It got stuck in my head and I liked it too much not to use.

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sg_betty June 5 2008, 03:48:25 UTC
Excellent Teal'c POV! Loved the banter between the two of them. "But that leaves Daniel as the one with powers of invisibility, and I have a hard enough time keeping track of him as it is." Ha! Indeed.

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kalquessa June 5 2008, 16:03:34 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad the POV worked, I wasn't sure I was getting it quite right, as I've never tried to write internal Teal'c voice before.

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sg_fignewton June 5 2008, 13:40:39 UTC
But that leaves Daniel as the one with powers of invisibility, and I have a hard enough time keeping track of him as it is.

::sporfles::

"Y'know, T, I sometimes worry that you've forgotten which one of us is supposed to be the straight-man in this relationship."

Oh, Jack, you silly man. You've been playing straight man to Teal'c for a long, long time. :)

Yay for Jack and Teal'c friendship!

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kalquessa June 5 2008, 16:04:47 UTC
Hee. Invisible Daniel. The possibilities are endless, and almost uniformly involve Jack dying of a coronary.

vOh, Jack, you silly man. You've been playing straight man to Teal'c for a long, long time. :)

So true. By the time he leaves for Washington, I think he's the only person who hasn't figured this out.

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