[Fic] Things - Dean, stream of consciousness, 11x01 tag

[kalliel]

writing warm-up 10/11; because premieres don't always have time for interiority

Title: Things
Genre: gen, stream of consciousness, 11x01 tag
Character: Dean
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~900
Summary: except here's Sam, tugging at things and making sure no one gets left behind, not the monsters not Dean and Sam starts making his case against Winchester

Comments

[freya922]

Ooooooooo - so disturbing and disorienting and terrifying and GOOD.

[kalliel]

Thank you! :) I'm glad you enjoyed.

[flawedteacup]

This was SO DEAN right now. What a great description. Also, this may be the first fic I've ever read that just comes out and says this total truth: "Because he’s kind of an obsessive person and not once has intimate focus on this or that ever got him anywhere good."

[kalliel]

Thank you so much for reading! And I'm glad you liked that line, because I do think it's reflective of how Dean tends to do things, and where that tends to end up...

[milly_gal]

Oh wow honey, that was terrifying, and really dizzy making! *\o/* You are fast becoming one of my FAVE SPN writers, like FAVE!!!

[kalliel]

Aww, thank you, bb! Hope I don't disappoint too foten, haha. <3

[milly_gal]

Never have yet! Haven't actually met a fic of yours I haven't adored!

[jj1564]

This was amazing, you really climbed inside Dean's head and it's exactly how I think he is feeling. I loved this..

"There’s too much to process so you gotta just put your hands up--not surrender, never surrender--you gotta put your hands up and shove it the fuck back to make room for the road and the zombies on the road and that works for Dean."

[kalliel]

This is definitely what I read out of him from 11x01, and I am so looking forward to 11x02 (and maybe slowing down just a weeeeeee bit, though for 11x01 I thought the energy/craziness was perfect!). ;P

Thank you for reading!

[jj1564]

It was all very hectic and poor Dean, he went straight from almost killing Sam, 'killing' Death and finally getting rid of The Mark slap bang into the weird embrace of The Darkness! He's barely had time to catch his breath. I'm looking forward to the next episode too :)

[kalliel]

Good heavens, right?! Color me eternally impressed by their ability to keep it together and just uh, go with the flow. Not that they have much of a choice, but that's for sure a skill they've got down pat by now. XP UGH, POOR BBs!

[borgmama1of5]

Somehow in this dizzying nonstop stream you perfectly conveyed how this situation must feel to Dean--you really hit all the salient points, in a beautifully oblique way!

[kalliel]

Thank you, bb! I'm glad this worked for you. My main commentary is DEANNNN, really. But when isn't that true? :P

Again, thanks for reading~