[Fic] Sesame Seeds - Sam, Dean, Ruby; hurt/comfort, fluff/angst, S4

May 30, 2011 01:17

I KNOW, AGAIN. THIS IS THE LAST TIME FOR A WHILE, PROMISE. Going to go to paper writing, exam prepping things. See you in a month!

Title: Sesame Seeds
Genre: gen, hurt/comfort (fever/nausea/exhaustion - Dean), angst/fluff/angsty fluff?
Characters: Sam, Dean, Ruby
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~3000
Notes: Takes place sometime after 4x10 "Heaven ( Read more... )

fic: spn

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shaitanah May 30 2011, 14:12:16 UTC
Oh God, Dean in s4, post-hell, is always so painful to read about. And Sam doped up with demon blood...
I don't know how to describe what this story makes me feel. Something between 'awww' and 'T____T' and 'eek!' with a dash of '<33333'.
He wants-- (to lean over, kiss Dean on the forehead, to do something) for everything to be okay. Don't we all by now? T_T <333
Marvelous job as always, darling! It'll never cease to amaze me how you manage your words. Whatever you write, they simply sing.

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kalliel June 15 2011, 19:37:51 UTC
Ahaha, I'm glad that it made you feel a multiplicity of emotions! That makes me happy. :D It's fun to write Samn'Dean being awwww and T_____T and eek! with some <33333 so I'm glad the reading is entertaining as well.

And as always you are too kind with your words. Love you, bb! Thank you for reading~

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kettle_o_fish May 30 2011, 14:36:24 UTC
Aww. They're so broken, but still so...Sam n'Dean.

"You put that end in your mouth and eat it," Sam supplies helpfully.

Dean snorts. "Thanks. You're just full of advice, man. What would I do without you?"

"Crash and burn."

"Ohhh, been plenty of crashing and burning today."

<3<3<3

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kalliel June 15 2011, 19:39:11 UTC
Hee hee! XD Thank you for reading, bb! I'm glad you enjoyed~ I am QUITE enjoying writing all of this brotherlyness.

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justlikeswimmn June 15 2011, 21:23:56 UTC
That was so beautiful! I love how you captured Sam's state of mind, so guilty and twisted and yet so so thankful to have Dean back. Interspersed with the horror of demon blood steak while Dean was in hell, way creepy! Especially loved this bit (among many!):

"Ruby takes Sam's steak knife and presses it to her wrist, lengthwise. She spills herself onto the hot plate between them, and adds a few pieces of raw meat. They snap and shudder in their bloody marinade. Medium rare. "Try this one," she says. "We'll try it straight next time. Baby steps, Sammy.""

I loved hearing more about that period for Sam, where you make it so clear how Ruby managed to get Sam addicted to demon blood. Thank you so much for a great story!

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kalliel June 16 2011, 09:08:46 UTC
I'm glad you liked this! It was ridiculously fun to play around with, especially Sam's role here, both with his brother and with Ruby. Thank you for reading; I'm glad you enjoyed~

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geckoholic June 15 2011, 22:20:14 UTC
What Sam wants is dinner for two, real dinner, with real food, and real two.
NGH. BRB, weeping for the two of them.

Great style, as always, BB. :)

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kalliel June 15 2011, 22:26:12 UTC
IKR I'M JUST LIKE, OH GOD SAM AND DEAN, BBs. ;___; <33

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked!

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amonitrate June 16 2011, 00:49:40 UTC
I just realized I never commented on this, and I liked it!

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kalliel June 16 2011, 09:11:47 UTC
Ahaha, I do that all the time, you don't even know. XP At some point I will make runs and go back to comment on all the fic I lurked. But thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed~

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