Tenses and Pronouns, Part One

[kalleah]

This is third in a series featuring Ten II and Rose, following on from The Quiet Chamber and Flying Kites.

Thanks to platypus and nonelvis, who have patiently betaed this story and, as usual, helped me determine what needed to stay and what needed to go. A good editor is a writer's true ally.

Warning: Contains adult content in part two (which will be posted later

Comments

[kalleah]

Thank you! I've been itching to have it finished and out there for the world for a while.

[unfolded73]

I am so thrilled to see this story beginning to go up. The sexual tension in this part is so beautifully handled. I can't wait to see the next part!

[kalleah]

Thanks. I guess the "adult" warning gives away that there will be resolved tension in the near future. ;)

[platypus]

*sigh*

That is the hottest not-yet-smutty thing ever. The tension is just lovely.

[kalleah]

I'm so glad you're not tired of seeing it. :)

[javabreeze]

[kalleah]

Thank you!

[nonelvis]

Half the reason I'm happy to see you posted this is that it means soon I'll get to see what the final draft of the second half looks like ;) But this first half is lovely as well.

[kalleah]

Heh! It's a bit different from what you've seen. As I said to platypus, it's reassuring to know you're both not sick of it!