Sense exercise #3

[kalinda001]

Another attempt at a sense exercise. This time using a scene from a current story and trying to incorporate different sense impressions. At final count, I only managed to incorporate 3.

Comments

[vilakins]

Poor Vila!

Touch: feeling cold and shivery, or tingly from the after-effects? Smell: his own sweat, or a drink left by his bed? Oh yeah, taste: the drink, or the stale taste of his mouth necessitating one?

[kalinda001]

Thanks for the suggestions.

[jaxomsride]

Touch, contrast of the nice safe bed he's in now in contrast to the cold, metallic frames they were strapped to?
Poor Vila!

[kalinda001]

Good suggestion. Thanks.