B7 Perceptions: A Difference of Visions - Chapter 16

[kalinda001]

Category: Drama, Humour
Rating: Gen
10th Story of Perceptions
Sequel to Mysteries and Discoveries

Introduction: Jenna has a new business. The women of Chandar make a decision. Argus and Vila try to fix the mess they accidentally made.

Author's Note: Thanks tojaxomsride for the quick beta and the valuable suggestions for the cargo hold scene. The text in

Comments

[vilakins]

Ha! Vila's slip actually worked out really well. I feel a bit sorry for Argus having to propose in public though.

If I was Cally, I'd tell Sester what I think of him ordering her about like that.

You've done a good well, Jen.
Either that's an expression I don;t know, ot she's done well, or a good job.

[kalinda001]

Yes, Vila's slip worked nicely =)

Either that's an expression I don;t know, ot she's done well, or a good job.
Oops. That was supposed to be "a good job". Fixed. Thanks.

[kalinda001]

If I was Cally, I'd tell Sester what I think of him ordering her about like that.
I've added a few lines at the end of that scene to change the tone a bit.

[jaxomsride]

Sester is as prickly as Avon. Funny Cally didn't see it as a defence mechanism to push her away.

Poor Argus, he never has his courtship easy!

[kalinda001]

Yes. Cally is not very objective where Sester is concerned. She doesn't know what to make of him. Part of her doesn't want to see him sympathetically.

Poor Argus, he never has his courtship easy!
Yes, the poor boy never gets a break ;)