B7: Mysteries and Discoveries - Chapter 40

Mar 11, 2009 22:33


Category: Angst
Rating: Gen
9th Story of Perceptions
Sequel to Pursuing Truth

Introduction: The boyz have an adventure. Part 1.

Author's Note: The 4 Boyz Story is nearing its conclusion.

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jaxomsride March 12 2009, 02:51:04 UTC
Like the interplay.
Damn though we know this plot isn't going to work as Argus did end up in Space Command.

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vilakins March 12 2009, 06:28:21 UTC
Yeah, what she said. Poor boys. Of course, if they had all escaped, there's be no story.

I'm not sure that a beta grade would be as poor and shabby-looking as Vila is here (or in the last story; I read them both together). I see them as technical: intelligent and capable, but not the designers, rather like Coser was thought to be.

Will you explain that latent memories may have attracted them to each other--Vila to Avon on the London, and Argus to Avon and Via and the rebels? Otherwise it's a huge coincidence they got together. :-)

The 4 Boyz Story is nearing it's conclusion.
its :-)

Kerr scowled at the blond boy. "Jack's not dumb. He's very smart. He just has principles, which is more than I can say for you."
Is the blond boy Vila or Charles?

Its fun hitting things and it helps release stress.
It's

Is this the past of your Avon and Vila AU?

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kalinda001 March 12 2009, 13:08:16 UTC
Vila doesn't look shabby but crawling around in the tunnels, he wouldn't be wearing his good clothes. Charles doesn't realize this and as Vila noted, he is a snob so he has skewed opinions of people in lower-grades.

Latent memories? Yes partially. It explains the relationships they seem to instantly develop when they're together...but it doesn't necessarily explain how they got together in the first place, if that makes sense.

Avon is referring to Charles when he's making the comment about the principles. He's not pleased with Charles during this conversation.

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vilakins March 12 2009, 19:03:05 UTC
Ah. It's just that Vila was probably blond too as a kid, so that was confusing.

Slight memory leakage might attract them to each other and their causes. Otherwise the coincidence is too great.

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kalinda001 March 12 2009, 19:08:25 UTC
Yes. There is something much larger at work here.

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reapermum March 12 2009, 12:27:25 UTC
Problem with the links. You've headed this part as Chapter Thirty-Nine even though it's actually Chapter Forty, as the subject line says. The link to Previous Chapter does take me back to the genuine Chapter Thirty-Nine, but that page's Next Chapter doesn't go anywhere. :~)

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kalinda001 March 12 2009, 13:17:42 UTC
Oops. Links and Subject lines fixed now. Thanks.

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reapermum March 12 2009, 12:31:28 UTC
And a bit of Brit-picking.

Jack's not dumb. He's very smart

We don't usually say dumb in that context, he'd be stupid or more likely thick

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kalinda001 March 12 2009, 13:18:27 UTC
Changed.

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