B7: Knowing the Enemy - Chapter 09

[kalinda001]

Rating: Gen
6th Story of Perceptions
Sequel to Memories

EDIT:  Made adjustments to improve the flow and also some additions. Marked in blue.
EDITED:  Sorry everyone, had to repost this because, for some strange reason, the other one doesn't show up anymore, except for me. I've also taken the opportunity to add a Vila and Sester part which were missing

Comments

[reapermum]

It's visible to me at the moment.

[kalinda001]

That's good. Thanks. I will stay away from making any more revisions.

[reapermum]

But you have done another edit, haven't you? I don't recall the second additions being in red, or am I having a

[kalinda001]

*Sigh* Yes. *slaps hands* I couldn't help it. I realized I should have made it easier to identify the second revision. I will really really try to not touch it anymore.

[jaxomsride]

That does work better.
Galena is definitely affecting all the males on the ship - wonder how all those military types are coping?

Well its definitely encouraging Argus and Avon in their "pursuits".

[vilakins]

I like the additions, esp the ones in red as I wondered how Vila and Sester were affected.

My guess is that the people holding Galena have fiddled with her genes somehow (they were doing medical research) and intend her to be captured so that she can wreak havoc in the enemy camp. As she has started to do. After all, she wasn't like this before or there'd have been chaos at the restaurant.

LMAO

[type_40]

"After drafting an eager Vila to cover him on the flight deck, Argus and Reya arrived at Avon's workshop. The door slid open and they saw Avon and Cally engaged in a non-studying and non-workshop type activity. They let the door slide closed without entering."

Wonderful humour. :) It's a great pity you or someone like you didn't write for the series.