adding the picture was an unexpected bonus. No matter how long the chapter is it always seems to go by so fast. they are going to be so surprised when they find out Zod is there. Obviously Elise isn't allowed to go on the rescue mission but will they let Jason go? Will they try calling the authorities to help? Will everyone come out of this alive? And what is with Jason giving away the fact that Bruce Wayne is part of the JLA at the beginning of part two. I figured they wouldn't tell her the secrets of other JLA members.
This line: Her contributions behind the scenes had kept Uncle Bruce’s name out of the paper even when some of his enemies were determined to expose him isn't dialogue. Jason thinks it, but doesn't say it aloud, so he never gave away Uncle Bruce's true identity. He and Elise have talked about how Lois keeps the JLA's identities secret, but he never named names.
Hmm, we may need to edit slightly to make that fact clear.
Will everyone come out of this alive? That's the million-dollar question, isn't it? :D
I actually told rizny when she posted that at the Porn Battle a few months back that I was going to use it here and she was happy about it, so there you go. :D It was so aching perfect for this scene.
Why don't we get stuff like THAT in a Superman film???
Agreed. I think the closest we got was the 'Asleep' scene in SII. And I'm a huge sucker for the affection between them even more than the sex. There's just such a strong connection.
Hee! You haven't seen the last of the Jalise. Something big happens next chapter, actually somethings, and Elise is important for one of those things. Don't worry, we have big plans for her. ;)
zomg. zomg ladies. z o m g Now, I know you know I love plotty fics.And I know you know I love it when kids are involved in a story. And I'm pretty damn sure the world knows I love Lois & Clark. So,y'know, putting all together, Little Secrets would look like the perfect fic for me.
But no, this, THIS is fantabulous to me. Aside from the plotty mystery & the action sequences, the story focuses on the reality of a relationship. The rockiness Lois & Clark went through is pretty much as real as it gets. The wonderful messiness of family life-- husband-wife/parent-child/sibling-sibling interactions-- are all in here in vivid detail and despite the action, I can't help but feel like this is the main point of the story. It's just kind of sneakily put in amidst the mystery & fighting & sex & baddies. ;)
So thank you so much for writing a story that (so far) has managed to pique all my hot buttons. BEST end of semester present and I can't wait to see how it resolves.
I just cried. You have NO idea what that means to me, lady. And from one of my all-time favorite authors, too. I can only hope that we keep living up to that, love. And that's one hell of a motivation to get this fic right.
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This line: Her contributions behind the scenes had kept Uncle Bruce’s name out of the paper even when some of his enemies were determined to expose him isn't dialogue. Jason thinks it, but doesn't say it aloud, so he never gave away Uncle Bruce's true identity. He and Elise have talked about how Lois keeps the JLA's identities secret, but he never named names.
Hmm, we may need to edit slightly to make that fact clear.
Will everyone come out of this alive? That's the million-dollar question, isn't it? :D
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And Jason and Elise. Sigh... you had better give those kids a nice romantic kiss soon!
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Why don't we get stuff like THAT in a Superman film???
Agreed. I think the closest we got was the 'Asleep' scene in SII. And I'm a huge sucker for the affection between them even more than the sex. There's just such a strong connection.
Hee! You haven't seen the last of the Jalise. Something big happens next chapter, actually somethings, and Elise is important for one of those things. Don't worry, we have big plans for her. ;)
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Now, I know you know I love plotty fics.And I know you know I love it when kids are involved in a story. And I'm pretty damn sure the world knows I love Lois & Clark. So,y'know, putting all together, Little Secrets would look like the perfect fic for me.
But no, this, THIS is fantabulous to me. Aside from the plotty mystery & the action sequences, the story focuses on the reality of a relationship. The rockiness Lois & Clark went through is pretty much as real as it gets. The wonderful messiness of family life-- husband-wife/parent-child/sibling-sibling interactions-- are all in here in vivid detail and despite the action, I can't help but feel like this is the main point of the story. It's just kind of sneakily put in amidst the mystery & fighting & sex & baddies. ;)
So thank you so much for writing a story that (so far) has managed to pique all my hot buttons. BEST end of semester present and I can't wait to see how it resolves.
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I....
I just cried. You have NO idea what that means to me, lady. And from one of my all-time favorite authors, too. I can only hope that we keep living up to that, love. And that's one hell of a motivation to get this fic right.
Love you madly for this.
*sniffles*
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Is this the part where I tell you that I wanna be you when I grow up? :D
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