I finally have time to catch up - wow, you ladies are doing a wonderful job as always! Giselle is indeed a mosquito. Bet she has infectious diseases too. *(Snark, snark, snark)
Heh.
I like Elise's plan to tell Kala - good for her.
I wish I was more coherent but you know I suck at reviews. Good chapter!
Doesn't Kala already know who started the rumors and that was why she felt betrayed by Jason and Sebast both? I thought that was the reason she ran away in the first place?
Kala knows that Giselle is spreading rumors, but not that she's continued to lie or to what level she's lying. And Kala didn't run because of just the runors; that was just the straw that broke the camel's back.
Great Chapter!! I just can't imagine having a missing child for that long. There have been times when I thought that my kids were missing because when I called for them they didn't answer and I didn't see them in their rooms or in the yard and I went looking and right before I called 911 I checked their rooms again and they were sound asleep the covers covering their whole bodies. LOL But to have one really missing and you can't find them...I just can't imagine. It just kinda hits close to home right now because of RL. I just remember how I felt those couple of times when I thought my kids were missing. I just can't imagine not having them in my house like that. I think that you have captured Lois and Kal-El perfectly. Although I think that Lois should make Kal-El go up for a sun bath. Maybe he could hear her heart that way. Who knows? And if they don't find her by mid-morning they should get the JL involved with the search, well the ones who are available to search anyway. Maybe Kal-El would never ask, but maybe if Lois asks them, or
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EXCELLENT chapter, ladies. :D I am, of course, hating Giselle more and more, and now wish her a slow, torturous death. Sebast is made of utter WIN; I so loved him storming in, and later all four of them heading out to start canvassing as well. Jason's new attitude (especially from Giselle's POV ^_~) is just perfect - more befitting the SV Clark than the REAL SV Clark at this point!
Poor Clark. Man, I can just see how run down he must look and feel. Having him snap at Oracle was a brilliant touch. NOBODY snaps at O and expects her not to bite back. O_O
And the chapter ending!! *flails* ~O_O~ I'm so relieved they were able to find that comfort with each other, even if it's only a temporary patch to keep them from falling completely apart. I stand by my earlier comment, too: they are gonna wake up so sticky! XD
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Giselle you little bitch. >:P Also I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE with that phone call.
...Did Sebast just call Giselle a death mosquito? Dead mosquito? LMFAO!
Oh Kal-el. I knew he would go hug her in the dark - that's perfect.
Three times? O.o Um...go them?
Loved seeing everybody revving up for the action. And now I am DEFINITELY ready to read some action! :D
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Hee - that was my reaction. Loved that little snark! ;)
Three times? O.o Um...go them?
He's Superman - three times is nothing to him. ;)
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Heh.
I like Elise's plan to tell Kala - good for her.
I wish I was more coherent but you know I suck at reviews. Good chapter!
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Now I'm confused. Somebody please help me!!
{{hugs}}
Mac
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It's okay; don't be confused. *hugs*
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Poor Clark. Man, I can just see how run down he must look and feel. Having him snap at Oracle was a brilliant touch. NOBODY snaps at O and expects her not to bite back. O_O
And the chapter ending!! *flails* ~O_O~ I'm so relieved they were able to find that comfort with each other, even if it's only a temporary patch to keep them from falling completely apart. I stand by my earlier comment, too: they are gonna wake up so sticky! XD
*applauds wildly*
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